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posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:13 AM
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Please, Let me know what you think. I am trying to determine whether or not I should continue to make videos.
I am not afraid to show my face.






posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:22 AM
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a reply to: Luuke123

Keep 'em coming. I think you share some great ideas about the media (and social media) being used as a tool distraction.

One piece of advice I would have is just to articulate the words and make sure you are projecting enough consistently because there was once or twice where I wasn't quite sure what you said.

Also if you can find a way to have an introduction or conclusion like you see with a lot of other vids on youtube, it might help to "Brand" yourself and create smooth transitions. Just a few thoughts - thanks for sharing with us!



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:24 AM
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a reply to: Luuke123

Keep doing what you're doing.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:24 AM
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a reply to: FamCore

Thank you for your reply!
I think your advice will be very useful.
I appreciate the input!



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:26 AM
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a reply to: galaga

Thank you for your reply!
I will continue if I get some more responses, if I know a few people will be interested.
Either way my thoughts will stay on track.




posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:37 AM
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a reply to: Luuke123

That was well said, bravo to you! I like what you said about being honest and telling the truth!




posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:42 AM
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I watched it.

Hear me out here. I like it.
Good ideas, good content...but bad delivery.

You need to be more animated. Speak a bit louder - but dont scream into the mic, and voice in different tones - This video was very mono-tone.
I had to turn up my speakers a few times and click back in the video to make out what was being said.

Now the big one to consider:
Anyone can make a video to speak about whats on their mind.
So you need to ask yourself:
Why would your target audience want to watch your videos...and not someone else?
What makes you stand out against the rest?
To answer that you need to Spice it up. Kick it up a notch. Bam!
Engage with your audience. Keep it lively and interesting.

Another thing to consider, people will leave comments on your videos, asking questions, or wanting further explanations on your topics.
Address those people in follow up videos.
Answer a few of the best questions to keep the video relevant and on point.
This will show your not just some empty suit reading off a script.
It will make your audience want to watch your videos because you might talk to them personally in the next video.
Everyone wants fame...even your audience.

I hope this helps.
If you have any questions send me a PM



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 10:52 AM
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Sorry didn't understand it, accent and voice wasn't smooth and even, probably get a muffled microphone
Don't swear, it makes you look a little to much attention seeking or angry.
Subtitles



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:03 AM
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a reply to: Raggedyman

Duly noted on swearing! it is a bad habit of mine. I do have an accent and i will try to work on that.
As for the microphone, I can't afford better equipment right now.

Thanks for the reply!




posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:05 AM
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a reply to: Macenroe82

Thank you for your reply! I like that you touched on multiple areas.
I will have to think about the answers to those questions.
As for the mic, I can't afford a better one right now. But I will get better equipment eventually.!




posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:06 AM
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a reply to: Artemis12

Thank you for your reply and positive feedback!
Positive feedback is just as important as negative feedback, and vice versa!




posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:07 AM
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Honestly I thought it was crap.

Really poor delivery, I thought you were stoned, I have nothing positive to say about the video. Seems like you recorded it on your phone and had no idea what the video was supposed to be about.

Sorry to be so harsh but that was awful, stick to your day job



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:08 AM
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a reply to: Luuke123 I think the message is logical.
But as long as some or many humans are lost in the illusions provided from the top to keep the Species of mankind distracted lies will exist.
There are some lies so intertwined within the consciousness of mankind that to tell the truth may cause total planetary disruption.
For example it is observed many humans are locked into their Religious and or Scientific beliefs. That has given some humans a feeling of Superiority over animals and even other humans. Sort of the top of the food chain complex. And if or when humans find out that there are "others" for example who are outside of that perception that truth alone can shatter the mind states of many who populate this small planet. Can you imagine the ramifications if humans found out for example they are Eternal Souls or IS-BE foreign to this region/planet that are being attracted-held here & being dominated by other IS-BE from this region? On like a reservation, zoo, lab or farm for Souls. Some I can imagine would totally lose it if they found out there are other beings that treat humans like livestock are treated by humans... So it seems some lies are being continued and truths withheld until the species of mankind is mature enough religiously and scientifically to wake up.
In order to prevent total species psychological meltdown.

Personally in my studies of Religious - Science - Ufology I couldn't understand at first why if some government space and or military agencies have truth about Extraterrestrial existence and even their presence here why they would withhold the truth or lie about them existing and interacting here. But as I further analyze humanity it came to me that some of those agencies may want to disclose the truth but may have influences from those non humans overseeing the process who may have an alien agenda. And those members or the families of the members of said agencies may face harsh outcomes if they shared the truth about said alien agenda. And so truth withheld and lies begin to feel the void where truth would exist.
So again Luuke123 your posted video carries logic
there just seems to be consequences if certain truths are brought to light. Without authorization from above...

Thing is these potential alien agenda that sit above the pyramid social schemes that control and manage humanity have affects on the people at the foundations of these social pyramid schemes as those humans who sit atop the pyramid social schemes with a glimpse at those with an all seeing eye go into survival mode and prepare why keeping those at the pyramid base lost in confusion and distraction. Which may be a reason for the many lies as some at the top with a glimpse of what is beyond the social pyramids managing mankind are preparing and not alerting their fellow man at the foundations or below them of what to prepare for...

NAMASTE*******



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:12 AM
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a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin

anything constructive would've been appreciated. Your post doesn't come off as someone who is "sorry" at all.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:16 AM
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originally posted by: FamCore
a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin

anything constructive would've been appreciated. Your post doesn't come off as someone who is "sorry" at all.


Op asked for feedback and I gave it, I just really didn't like the video, the entire thing was just wrong to me.

Hard to give constructive criticism when the only thing constructive I have to say is that the guy in the video should stick to the day job.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:19 AM
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a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin

Oscar is that you?

I thought it was a good Video kid.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:21 AM
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a reply to: Blender5L

Who is oscar?



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:24 AM
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You need a little better camera, it blurs a lot when you move your hand and almost gives me motion sickness.

It is a good start, but you need to get a little more focused and maybe talk a tad bit more clear, your voice is low, it gets hard to hear clearly what your saying. But the content seems to be good so keep practicing. Some parts are clear and easy to understand, others are sort of a little too slow and low tone. It does get a little clearer as you go along, it seems like you get a little more confident.

Keep making them, I am just trying to give constructive criticism. It will take maybe three videos to get good, hopefully you get a little better camera or quit moving your hands. Even your face blurrs, I do not know what causes that.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:45 AM
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a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin

A monster who lives in a garbage can. His best friend is a worm called slimey.



posted on Jun, 27 2017 @ 11:55 AM
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a reply to: Blender5L








 
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