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Creative Desolation [CRE2017] Writer

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posted on Jun, 2 2017 @ 10:22 AM
Long ago .. before Creation began. Before the planets were formed, before the stars were mere pinholes in the curtain of thought. Back when time had no use and all that is, was not.

The Creators sat in the highest dominions of secret places. Places where nothingness existed and a peace so alluring, it would cut like a knife creating the Great Divide. There is none like Us they pondered. This would become the Creators' first thought. In the blink of an eye, Planets and Stars were formed, along with blackness and light. This Division would be the Greatest glory and the Most evil downfall ever known.

In the midst of all that was, is yet, is not, there lay a most cruel creature, created by mishap. The Beast as it was later called, had fiery breath and faded rusted blue scales that felt like iron. It's tongue like a sharpened sword and it's moans of a most frightening depth so as to pierce through the soul of any that heard it. The Creators became aware of the Beast, attempting to trap it but this was not an easy task. For it lived within the Space between Spaces, away from the glory of where the Creators reside.

They, the Creators came up with a plan, and thus, the first planet came into existence. J666OS was formed. A darkened blood red planet and barren of all things good. No green nor blue could be seen upon the surface of it's face. Nor any life was seen nor heard, save only the howls of the Beast thing where it had been thrust into outer darkness by the Creators.

To merely possess or engulf with the Beast would be certain tragedy and then death upon parts of Humanity which was yet to come. The Creators knew this from their very first undoing, and now slaved to undo it. After EA48 was created, long after the demi gods sprang to life throughout the stars later encountering aware life forms in their new Habitat.

The Beast stood in all it's Unglory, and Undignified presence, raged to be as God. This could not happen for it would destroy all in the most indecent way. It gnawed hungrily on its own arm as the blood of it's own fury dripped from it's fangs and onto the lifeless ground below it. It's eyes pierced into the blackness of night as it devised a plan of it's own escape from J666OS.

A War between the EA and the Creators became inevitable, and soon a battle was brewing. Thunder bolts like fire soared throughout the Space between Spaces mildly damaging the Beast which in turn would become prolonged due to it's Iron shell. It felt like all eternity to the EA but only the glimpse of a moment for the Creators. And that one moment solidified with perfect accuracy, had won and the hideous Beast was no more.

This would be known to the Ancients as the first Creation.

Hope you like it mates, Cheers!
edit on 2-6-2017 by Archonic because: (no reason given)

posted on Jun, 2 2017 @ 07:33 PM
a reply to: Archonic

Certainly did like it. Fine story.

My regards to you.


posted on Jun, 3 2017 @ 07:37 AM
a reply to: bally001

Yea thanks Mate! I'll get around to posting yours I flagged it already for ya, good story there ay.

posted on Jun, 6 2017 @ 07:30 PM
You are a wordsmith, Archonic. Nice writing!

posted on Jun, 14 2017 @ 06:14 AM
a reply to: PrairieShepherd

Totally cool mate thank you for that. Good contest this, can't wait for the results!

posted on Jun, 28 2017 @ 08:47 PM
a reply to: Archonic

The beast would make a fantastic story on his own if it hadn't been done away with.
Glad it was though.
Good luck!

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