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originally posted by: Night Star
Shlaw, you made me laugh when you said, "I see smarter people have responded". I feel like that sometimes too. It's ok, you still shine bright!
Again this will be my last post out of character in this thread, so please please don't be offended if I don't reply to any replies to this post.
I might suggest the same for perspective. For each section, choose your character that is experiencing the situation, and stick to them like glue.
originally posted by: pheonix358
Getting feedback as an author is hard ... people tend not to want to hurt your feelings. That attitude does not help an author grow.