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The Fires of inspiration

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posted on May, 15 2017 @ 01:38 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

I don't mean taking anything out, but adding more detail. I kinda feel like daelim is pretty flat right now and I could probably benefit from exploring his reactions a bit more and I usually am able to phrase stuff better when I rewrite.




posted on May, 15 2017 @ 01:57 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Then by all means, go for it!



posted on May, 15 2017 @ 10:29 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Think I'm just gonna try and finish it or get stuck first before I really revise it.

Made a good amount of work today here's an snippet, as song about Daelims fight.

"The silent one there stood
With blade against darkness,
His shield held close,
Heart thrust forward.

His eyes were alight
as he stared into the night,
His Muse right behind him.

In fury the blight descended,
Terror it screeched
As the man rushed forward.

A quick exchange
In a flurry of motion,
Blade flashing true
bade the monster
Release into light"



posted on May, 15 2017 @ 11:37 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Wonderful! The light outshines the darkness. Keep going!




posted on May, 16 2017 @ 12:02 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

I had an idea just now don't know if it goes anywhere or not yet. But I thought I might do a novel part and an epic poem companion



posted on May, 16 2017 @ 12:08 AM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Ahhh!!! It completely slipped my mind!!

Happy late birthday present!

XD



posted on May, 16 2017 @ 01:30 PM
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originally posted by: LucidWarrior
a reply to: LucidWarrior

Ahhh!!! It completely slipped my mind!!

Happy late birthday present!

XD


HUGS!



posted on May, 16 2017 @ 01:49 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

You know when this makes it to completion I'm gonna have to put in a HUGE thanks to you, right?



posted on May, 16 2017 @ 06:37 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Wow, really???? I would be so honored!




posted on May, 16 2017 @ 08:07 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Well I mean you're a large part of why I'm still writing it. I'd probably still have been avoiding it otherwise.




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