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The First Step - [YJA2017] - [non-writer]

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posted on Mar, 10 2017 @ 02:40 AM
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a reply to: FauxMulder

Thanks for your comments Mulder, its appreciaed!





posted on Mar, 10 2017 @ 02:41 AM
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a reply to: TEOTWAWKIAIFF

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment.




posted on Mar, 10 2017 @ 03:15 PM
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heliopolis - I really liked this story. Very well presented. I kept saying to myself, "No, man, don't jump!"

But, of course, as you say - that's me filling in the blanks as a reader. I really like how you executed this piece. S & F



posted on Mar, 10 2017 @ 03:57 PM
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a reply to: PrairieShepherd

Thanks for the comments Prairie, it's appreciated. I'm glad you liked my contribution!




posted on Mar, 24 2017 @ 08:27 PM
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a reply to: heliopolis

Really good mate



posted on Mar, 25 2017 @ 02:14 AM
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a reply to: Archonic

Cheers Archonic, appreciate it





 
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