posted on Mar, 12 2017 @ 05:18 PM
a reply to: heliopolis
Thanks, helio! I appreciate your kind words. Conversation is something I agonize over, actually! LOL People in real life have referred to me as
talking like I'm reading out of an encyclopedia, so I get a little nervous about how I write people talking. It's reassuring to hear it called
"natural" in this story.
a reply to: TNMockingbird
Pontificating on my interpretation of the deeper message of your story would be quite a conundrum, for sure.
You read the whole shootin' match of the thread, didn't you, not just the story?
Jacy & I had a little fun with our banter. She won, of course.
I'm glad you enjoyed this story, Chirp. There are a few aspects of it that are pretty personal, to be honest, so it was not easy to write or post -
but I'm glad it's been so well received.
RE: My Shed story - it doesn't have an official title. I have two working titles and have not chosen which one I prefer. The first is "Exile", and
the second is "Falling". I'm leaning toward "Falling." I have in fact considered putting the story in its own thread. Or at least, putting the
index to all the posts in its own thread. However, it feels to me like the Shedisans have the first claim on it, so to speak, so I'm a bit hesitant
to break it out to its own thread.
a reply to: jacygirl
I know, right? I read that and laughed out loud too.
a reply to: Archonic
Thanks, Archonic! I'm glad you came over here to read it - like I mentioned in your thread, I think it's an interesting contrast to your story, which
I found most enjoyable to read.