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Becoming - [YJA2017] non-writer

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posted on Mar, 6 2017 @ 01:29 PM
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a reply to: UncleSoze

*bumping thread* haha...

Now you're being too kind! "style and ease"...?

For most of us it's "alcohol and angst", lol. Mostly luck though.

Some of us who started writing here, found that sometimes a story just practically writes itself...other times it feels like pulling teeth. I hope to see you writing more.
jacy




posted on Mar, 6 2017 @ 06:31 PM
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originally posted by: UncleSoze

originally posted by: Night Star
Beautiful ending!


Thank you kindly ma'am

I hope you put an entry into this, I admire your poetry ... and the more the merrier



Awww, how sweet of you to say! I have writer's block right now though. Hugs!



posted on Mar, 7 2017 @ 05:04 PM
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originally posted by: jacygirl
a reply to: UncleSoze

For most of us it's "alcohol and angst", lol. Mostly luck though.

jacy



so you're saying I AM on the right track, eh ?



after reading here for a while, y'all truly make it seem easy



posted on Mar, 7 2017 @ 05:11 PM
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originally posted by: Night Star

originally posted by: UncleSoze

originally posted by: Night Star
Beautiful ending!


Thank you kindly ma'am

I hope you put an entry into this, I admire your poetry ... and the more the merrier



Awww, how sweet of you to say! I have writer's block right now though. Hugs!


Totally understandable, hope inspiration doesn't wander off for too long....

I wanted to try the January contest with the time traveler motif, but the only thing that came to mind was having either Nostradamus or George Orwell wandering around laughing while telling everyone "I told you so"



posted on Mar, 7 2017 @ 05:13 PM
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a reply to: UncleSoze

Aww, you just haven't read the private messages we send each other...sobbing...deleting...re-writing!

It takes guts to put yourself out there.
You're definitely on the right track.

Also, this chit-chat is *bumping* your thread.


jacy



posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 11:55 AM
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a reply to: UncleSoze

So

Much


Tension


In there




posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 02:25 PM
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originally posted by: SprocketUK
a reply to: UncleSoze

So

Much


Tension


In there



Thank you kindly Sprocket ... I was aiming for just that
the 'unknowing' of an unexpected transition, coupled with the finality of the situation ... that would suck




posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 05:19 PM
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come float with me…
you and I my love…
we get to be…
and become…
everything……


Awww, that was sweet. Like SprocketUK said, so much tension, but you resolved it. Love the ending!



posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 05:31 PM
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I hope that is not my journey!

Reminds of the tales of being buried alive from the 1800's. You know, back when you were buried with a little string tied to a handle that rings a bell. Talk about fearful!




posted on Mar, 11 2017 @ 06:17 AM
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a reply to: UncleSoze

Reunited in the end, beautiful.

Scary trip there though!





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