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So Say Goodbye [YJA2017]

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posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 09:07 AM
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He looked back
on his Sins
his Loves
his Wins

Only to find he had been here before
back in this moment again
with Lord Yama at the door

with his final breaths
the ground shook
and he said

" So say goodbye to all My friends
My Idle Lovers and eager ends
to every bored and shallow social fling

So farewell to all of those
regretfully
I did oppose
and as nature shows
I fought you well

So bon voyage to this show
I carried unto my bones
to wear white cloth
and dance at night
in city streets
on mountain sides "

The End

edit on 1-3-2017 by kibric because: boo




posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 09:49 AM
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a reply to: kibric

hhmmm...dis seems rally good...hmmmthank you very mucho ngusto..encantada mego



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 09:52 AM
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a reply to: peppycat

thanks fella




posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 04:06 PM
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a reply to: kibric

Hi kibric!


Well that's the first poetic entry I've read, so kudos for that! (I love a good rhyme, lol)

It was intriguing and flowed well.
S&F
jacy



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 06:16 PM
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Nice poem!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 06:33 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thanks

you should do one

with

Elves
Immortals
Unicorns
and Dragons

Liam Neeson...



edit on 1-3-2017 by kibric because: boo

edit on 1-3-2017 by kibric because: boo



posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 04:20 PM
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a reply to: kibric

Nice to see a poem in YJA2017!

Nice meter! And like all good poems, take a bit to unravel.




posted on Mar, 4 2017 @ 05:17 AM
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a reply to: TEOTWAWKIAIFF

Cheers


it a good subject AugustusMasonimouse chose



posted on Mar, 11 2017 @ 05:55 AM
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a reply to: kibric

I like that you chose a poem as the format.
It seems as if death is no worry to the subject.



posted on Mar, 13 2017 @ 02:09 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thanks

that was jist in it really


edit on 13-3-2017 by kibric because: boo



posted on Mar, 22 2017 @ 10:34 AM
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Cool



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