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The Tiny Dot. YJA2017

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posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 11:54 PM
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I found myself in something that resembled "space".

Darkness was all around.

There is nothing. The thought of "something" doesn't exist.

I suddenly remembered bits and pieces of a place I once was. What was that? Was it a dream? What are dreams?

In the vastness of darkness, I start to remember what it's like to have friends, acquaintances, loved ones, and even enemies. I miss them all. I remember what loneliness is now. I am afraid, I am alone. Who am I? Why am I here...AM I here???

It is so dark, words don't describe the darkness. There is simply nothing. Not even a star in this vastness of "space".

As I sit in total darkness, I see a tiny speck of light. It's just a dot. That little dot is SOMETHING! Now I see hope. It's joy, it's elation! Something exists! My whole purpose now is to reach this dot!

I long to get closer to this speck of light. As my desire to reach this light grows, I get closer to it. It's coming in to view now..It's so bright. The closer I get, the more I feel love.

Now it makes sense! Love! Yesss! I would give anything to see even my greatest mortal enemy. My thoughts are suddenly filled with everything in the universe. Now I get it. I am overwhelmed with love. I understand my purpose now!

As I enter this light, I see my brother, and an old friend. They are still a distance away, but it's definitely them! I somehow just know it.

They are chuckling to each other as I arrive.

There is a bountiful amount of energy and joy here. No-one is less important than anyone. I feel this strongly. Music is going, but it's not human music, it's just there. A constant harmony. It's perfection.

As I finally approach my brother, he says "See? I told you everything would be OK! Haha!"

The End.

edit on 1-3-2017 by Wookiep because: (no reason given)




posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 12:17 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

I like it, that was really good.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 12:24 AM
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a reply to: luckskywatcher

Thank you my new friend.


I liked yours as well. I starred and flagged it. I know you love stars!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 12:27 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

I love stars yes i do lol!


Thank you for the s and f
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posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 01:30 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Awesome sauce.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 01:34 AM
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a reply to: CreationBro

Thank you, bro!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 02:40 AM
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I just realized I didn't include "non-writer" in the OP (can't edit now). Woops! Non-writer! Although I did have the writer title once.....but I was a bad boy and got it taken away....Would love to get it back!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 03:47 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Hey Wookiep!


Well you started out writing my worst nightmare, lol...dying and being conscious...but not "being".
(I ran to grab a donut to console myself!)

That was really great. I can't believe you lost your 'writer' status!

So glad to see you participating!
S&F (you will get your shiny title back)
jacy



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 03:55 AM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Thank you Jacy, I really appreciate it. You are a wonderful writer!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 03:58 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

You're too kind hun, I'm not great compared to so many here.
I stick to what I know, lol.

Replying to say "thank you" and also to 'bump' your story!
jacy



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 04:47 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Nice ending.

I hope the after life is like that.

Good luck to you and I enjoyed reading, thank you for posting.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 05:33 AM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you, appreciate it!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 11:04 PM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Oh I loved your entry, very refreshing I will say with a fantastic storyline!

S&F



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 11:16 PM
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a reply to: LadyButterfly

Much appreciated lady! Great timing too, I was just beginning to feel as though the tiny dot would disappear into the abyss of obscurity. Lol.



posted on Mar, 2 2017 @ 01:03 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

You're very welcome!l I have yet to come up with an entry and with so many amazing stories posted, the competition will be tough but all in fun! Hang in there



posted on Mar, 2 2017 @ 02:09 AM
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originally posted by: LadyButterfly
a reply to: Wookiep

You're very welcome!l I have yet to come up with an entry and with so many amazing stories posted, the competition will be tough but all in fun! Hang in there


Agreed. I think the topic of this contest really hits home for many people...I almost wonder if it's a premonition of sorts.. Like we all know this day is coming soon deep down within our collective conscience. (conspiracy bells are ringing!) As a result, so many wish to articulate, and with deep passion, the details of our coming demise... I also agree that many amazing stories have been posted!

We have a lot of talent here. I'll be happy just to receive a "participation trophy". Lol, It's great to see all of the activity going on here. I love seeing ATS so active!


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posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 12:23 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Nice!!




posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 05:53 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thanks Jinmi! Sorry for the late response!



posted on Mar, 4 2017 @ 06:38 AM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Very cool ... very good read



posted on Mar, 4 2017 @ 09:14 PM
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a reply to: UncleSoze

Thank you UncleSoze.




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