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The Man in the White Coat [YJA2017]

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posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 06:56 AM
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originally posted by: Night Star

Great writing Mason! Well done!


Thanks Elfy.

Champagne? Caviar?




posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 06:57 AM
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originally posted by: FauxMulder
I had read 4 or 5 so far and I was wondering when I would get to a "hell" story. Nice job man, made me laugh.


It had to be a different Hell though, life with a perpetual paper cut or constant reruns of Full House.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 08:04 AM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus


I had something completely different started but scraped it last night. I just felt like doing 'hell as a serious annoyance', type thing.

I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.


P.S. Poor Tom should have checked with me as I could have told him Everclear is death. May as well drink rocket fuel.
Unless, of course, it's got some fruit, a little rum...ice and one has a penchant for tempting the Reaper.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 08:08 AM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird
I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.


The other one was more of a silly Q&A with an angel where the guy gets to ask any questions he wants and gets really stupid answers.



P.S. Poor Tom should have checked with me as I could have told him Everclear is death. May as well drink rocket fuel.
Unless, of course, it's got some fruit, a little rum...ice and one has a penchant for tempting the Reaper.


I use it to make lemoncello and limecello. And prior to paragliding.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:09 AM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

Lemoncello is delicious!


edit on 1-3-2017 by Night Star because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:17 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

It's also good for paper cuts.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:19 AM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

So good. It was like seeing inside of the main character's mind. It led up to the full blown torture at a perfect pace. It is very darkly funny.




posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:23 AM
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originally posted by: AugustusMasonicus

originally posted by: TNMockingbird
I can't imagine anything better so I am glad you went with this one.


The other one was more of a silly Q&A with an angel where the guy gets to ask any questions he wants and gets really stupid answers.


You should post that one anyway, Id like to read it. A real smart ass angel lol



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:23 AM
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originally posted by: reldra
So good. It was like seeing inside of the main character's mind. It led up to the full blown torture at a perfect pace. It is very darkly funny.



Thank you. I always knew that deep down you enjoyed light torture.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 10:25 AM
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originally posted by: FauxMulder
You should post that one anyway, Id like to read it. A real smart ass angel lol


Maybe. I wasn't overly happy with it, I may rewrite it at some point.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 11:45 AM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

nice story. Very descriptive and subtle. Nice work.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 11:45 AM
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originally posted by: network dude
nice story. Very descriptive and subtle. Nice work.


Thanks, I saved you a seat.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 12:01 PM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus
Mason expertly done as always! Excellent! I think my bird is much nicer!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 12:02 PM
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originally posted by: Martin75
Mason expertly done as always! Excellent! I think my bird is much nicer!


Thank you. And I am sure that it is.




edit on 1-3-2017 by AugustusMasonicus because: President, Jacygirl fan club.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 04:32 PM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

Needs more cowbell.

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posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 05:26 PM
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originally posted by: IAMTAT
Needs more cowbell.


I was going to have DB sit on the guy but that would have been really, really cruel, even for Hell's standards.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 07:06 PM
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originally posted by: PageLC14
Perfect! And I loved the 'court side jester' material. Great read. Thanks for entering!

S&F


Sorry, I missed this earlier. Thank you.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 08:16 PM
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i'm failing english...sorry peeps
any buddy know what year t is?
oh wait....so now this thread is no longer...
wait wrong forum, sorry?



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 08:25 PM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

paper/hard cover would be preferable...best yet



posted on Mar, 2 2017 @ 09:35 AM
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originally posted by: peppycat
paper/hard cover would be preferable...best yet


I'll contact Scribner.



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