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Unchained [YJA2017]

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posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:02 PM
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U n c h a i n e d

looks over edge, closes eyes and takes a deep breath


I feel light as a feather and free as a bird. I can feel the wind breeze through my hair and the sun beam across my body. I am consoled by the gentle grace of the clouds as I pierce through the ocean skies. As the world around me moves at a thousand miles, I am still, I am calm, and I am at ease.

I am finally free...

No longer am I burden from the chains of life. I am free from the encumbrance of pressure, free from the punishment of expectation, free from the albatross of responsibility, free from the afflictions of love and the bindings of pain.

I no longer feel any sorrow, only joy.
I no longer feel any regret, only contentment.
I no longer feel any pain, only peace.

I don't know where I'm going, but I do know the end of one journey is the beginning of another.

The end.


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posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:18 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

Well done.




posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:20 PM
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a reply to: DBCowboy

Thanks cowboy, even though it's quite short compared to everyone elses entries, I really enjoyed writing this.




posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:20 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

Good one, i liked it.

But happiness without pain is dead. Pain is what tells us to make it stop, when it won't.
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posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:22 PM
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a reply to: luckskywatcher

Thanks for reading



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:25 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

You're welcome.

Remember to add more pain into your writing, it adds much to the content.



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:28 PM
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I may have a go at something, I haven't written anything in such a long time.



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 09:32 PM
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a reply to: luckskywatcher

Thanks for the advice, I wanted to portray pain but also relief, in a somber yet peaceful way. I'm still a noob


You should definitely write one too. I'll be looking forward to it.



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 10:54 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

Hi noob, now i've written my story. Give me a flag.



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 11:02 PM
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a reply to: luckskywatcher

So demanding, atleast let me read it first lol.



posted on Feb, 28 2017 @ 11:17 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

Demand is my middle name.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 03:42 AM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986

Hey You!! I knew you had it in you!


That was beautiful, almost poetic. The picture was a perfect visual to compliment your story.

I liked (no, loved) the lack of pain, to be honest. A lot of people have passed away recently (in my world) or are sick and on limited time now. I truly hope they go to someplace "free".

S&F
jacy



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 04:55 AM
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free from the afflictions of love and the bindings of pain.

Ahhh freedom, I love it!

So well written and poetic.

Thank you for entering and sharing this.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 06:27 AM
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Beautiful!!!!!!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 07:29 AM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

I'm glad you all enjoyed it, thanks for reading


I had a fun time creating it.



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 01:04 PM
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a reply to: knowledgehunter0986
I really enjoyed your story! It was as if I could see the woman in the picture taking the leap!



posted on Mar, 1 2017 @ 02:15 PM
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a reply to: Martin75

Thank you!

I don't think my story would've worked without the picture

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posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 10:01 AM
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Super





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