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The Essence Of Me

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posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:13 PM
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I am shaken by your storms
want to reach out and tame them
hold you tight in my arms
until the sky is clear once again

I am floating in the sea
of your thoughts and emotions
and I will comfort you there
through these cold lonely moments

I will linger in the shadows
when I know you are there
feeling the weight of the turbulent world
all around you

you are so deep
so intense
and I feel like I'm dreaming
Is that a part of me
I see in you?

Your words hold such power
and I cannot fathom
how real and how true
the essence of me
that I have found in you




posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:14 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Great writing



is it about your hubby ?

edit on 16-1-2017 by kibric because: boo

edit on 16-1-2017 by kibric because: boo



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:15 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

a beautiful piece - thank you for sharing with us



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:17 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Great words from a great woman! Thank you for sharing Ms. Leaper.


It's funny how after you spend so much of your life with another how entwined you become. I assume this is about Mr. NS and your years together.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:17 PM
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Very nice.
Is it about another person, or different parts of you?



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:17 PM
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a reply to: kibric


Thank you! You found this quickly.

It is something that just popped into my head quickly as I was listening to music.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:18 PM
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a reply to: FamCore

Thank you so much!



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:19 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thank you dear Jiminy!
You are late for night duty at the shed. Just sayin'. LOL



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:20 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Stunning!

You know they say the mind is a transdimensional portal. A portal that opens a door for entities to transverse. These entities impact meteorological events. Emotions temper the storms.

I-magi-nation.

Break down each word.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:20 PM
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originally posted by: Nothin
Very nice.
Is it about another person, or different parts of you?


Interesting question because it can be more than one person I know and even myself.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:22 PM
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originally posted by: Geki09
a reply to: Night Star

Stunning!

You know they say the mind is a transdimensional portal. A portal that opens a door for entities to transverse. These entities impact meteorological events. Emotions temper the storms.

I-magi-nation.

Break down each word.



The words came spilling forth so quickly, maybe it was from the other side of that door.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:38 PM
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Very good poem Night!




posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:38 PM
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That is pretty good nightstar. It would take me two years to write something like that, I am sort of a perfectionist. Then in the end I would throw it into lake superior without showing it to anyone. I did that with a poem back in the early seventies.

The strange thing is someone made up a poem almost the same ten years later, many states away.
It kind of started like this.

My thoughts travel through the night
past everything I hear and see
back along the strands of time
to the time we spent together.

That was the only poetry I ever wrote, it was in about 1970 The whole thing was about five paragraphs long, I can't remember the rest of it off hand.



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:46 PM
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a reply to: Errollorre

Thank you Sir Errollore Of The Shedlands!



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posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 10:48 PM
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a reply to: rickymouse

That was lovely! I wish you could remember the rest. Maybe you can come up with something to finish it. God, if I were a perfectionist with everything I wrote, nothing would ever get written. LOL



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 11:17 PM
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Deep and touching words from a deep and touching angel



posted on Jan, 16 2017 @ 11:18 PM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

Awwwww, hugs! Thank you Honey!



posted on Jan, 17 2017 @ 02:40 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

That was amazing!



posted on Jan, 17 2017 @ 05:38 AM
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a reply to: Night Star
It's so very pretty. It can be taken so many ways, can't it?
Happy you were so inspired.

a reply to: Jdennis10
Loving your new avatar doll



posted on Jan, 17 2017 @ 05:43 AM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you I look better now!




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