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The Lovely Bones of Life

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posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 01:40 AM
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A True Poem from heart to head.(a totally absolutely completely made up poem)

Walking through the trees, I see my life in focus.
Wonder and Joy, Sadness and Despair.

When will the Peace revive,
My soul once more..

I bleed in passion for what once was,
And wait for what could be.

The Sky falls with haste,
Upon me.

I dream of another time,
In which we did but rarely speak.

The portal of Time is opening up,
Time to go now beyond the ether.

Life is life.. and love is love,
One day Home will fall from above.

Enduring now is strange to me,
Home is where i long to be.

Beyond the clouds beyond the stars,
Take me forwards towards the trees.

Trees of Wisdom inside of me,
Tibetan monks await for thee.

Towards my Truth, Reality.
Here is just a standing place.

Alive yet Dead yet here i lay,
Awaiting my final Victory.

Time will tell, when all is said,
When all is done when all is dead.

Thank you for listening to my erroneous thoughts.



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posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 02:10 AM
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I wish someone would respond to my writing, i feel like a dork waiting for positive responsive replies. lol.



posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 02:20 AM
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a reply to: LadyButterfly









posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 02:22 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thank you Sweetie, lol.




posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 02:32 AM
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I've decided to write an anthology if you will, of my life story. Of my pain and trauma and Indignations...so that those i love will remember me when i'm gone.

This was a story, but close to home. Still only a Story


My Biography will be much deeper. Perhaps Amazonial Heights! My Grandmother will be the main depiction she deserves more than she got in life.
RIP.


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posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 10:51 AM
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a reply to: LadyButterfly


not bad, you should come up with a different title. It reminds me too much of the movie The Lovely Bones, along with it's content. Other than that, you do have a talent for poetry. remember to let it flow, and don't try so hard.



posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 01:14 PM
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originally posted by: LadyButterfly
I wish someone would respond to my writing, i feel like a dork waiting for positive responsive replies. lol.


Don't feel that way, please. Some folks perhaps, like me, prefer to read late at night or early in the morning,
when the world is still and quiet.




Enduring now is strange to me, Home is where i long to be.

My favorite line.

I enjoyed all of them.



posted on Dec, 9 2016 @ 02:03 PM
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Awesome my friend! Keep writing! I for one look forward to reading more of your works!!!




posted on Dec, 28 2016 @ 06:48 PM
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Thanks everyone I apprecIate your words!

(HUGS)




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