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A Christmas of The Still [SCC2016]

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posted on Dec, 1 2016 @ 11:34 AM
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Non Writer SCC2016



A sound of fright a sound that might take this Christmas Carol away. A ghost of time a spy of mine will not let Christmas ever be the same. The thoughts within must begin with this never ending Christmas dream.

She was blown away by the things that stay. She carried a tune in her room of darkness everyday. On this night she burned a light hoping it would go away. This beast of hate found its fate and blasted her night away.

Time was still when she got a chill from this shrill. Her presents await under the gate next to her tree of doom. She walks in fear year after year waiting for this thing to appear. When she was nine she lost her mind eating Christmas cake for two.

Day after day she cries fire from her eyes hoping it's just a dream. When she wakes up she sips from a cup of empty of tears. Slipping away to ease her day she finds her presents are now missing. She screamed and screamed for help but nothing was there but the fear of another year.

It's Christmas Day and she is blown away from noises in the night.

She hides under covers of red and green.

She screamed again and again but this time her creepy door opened.

She heard a voice saying "Julie, its mommy baby it's Christmas, Santa was stuck in the chimney last night delivering you presents. I hope you slept ok."

Julie has been a ghost for 33 years and she cannot wait to haunt again.

If you hear a creepy Christmas Carol you will know Julie is near...

Then End
edit on 1-12-2016 by Jdennis10 because: Spelling

edit on 1-12-2016 by Jdennis10 because: Fixed mistake




posted on Dec, 1 2016 @ 12:59 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

ahaa!
Well done Jd!

That's the spirit... I suspect that you may not be a "non-writer" for much longer with skills like this!


BigG



posted on Dec, 1 2016 @ 01:05 PM
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a reply to: Gordi The Drummer

Thank you Sir Gordi for reading.



posted on Dec, 2 2016 @ 10:09 AM
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Well done!



posted on Dec, 2 2016 @ 10:35 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thank you Night Star



posted on Dec, 2 2016 @ 10:45 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10


Good job JD!



posted on Dec, 2 2016 @ 11:59 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

Nice One JD, an excellent plot line!






posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 12:40 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thank you JinMI it means a lot that you read my story!



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 12:41 AM
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a reply to: JesusXst

Thank you too JesusXst. You must be Earth bound.



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 06:50 AM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

Earth bound, Not at all.



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 12:08 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

Nice job JD! Very Well done!!!



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 01:18 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you SyxPak, yours was amazing



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 02:04 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

Awww shucks Maam!!
LOL!!



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 03:12 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

There is a lot of competition here in the contest!



posted on Dec, 3 2016 @ 03:30 PM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

I know right? There are some amazing entries!!! I'm not expecting to win or anything. I have writers status already so... It is fun to do these none the less!!LOL!!



posted on Dec, 5 2016 @ 01:19 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

I don't expect to win. I did my best. Thank you.



posted on Dec, 7 2016 @ 11:20 AM
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a reply to: Jdennis10

I was completely immersed.
NICE!





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