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Kingdom Of Ashes

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posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 04:26 AM
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Barren,
Hollow,
Soundless,

Sodden,
Harrowed,
Boundless,

From shore to blackened shore,
Ruined border to sundered line,
All lay in ashes,
Ruled only by time,
Golden throne emptied,
By hubris hand dethroned,
Supping on the heartblood,
Till the King stands alone,

This Kingdom of ashes,
This funereal waste,
Wind howls through the ruin,
The bones of this devastated place,
This Kingdom of ashes,
This pyre long burned out,
Destroyed by fury,
Fueled by fear and doubt,

Dissected,
Molested,
Doomed,

Infected,
Infested,
Entombed,

The rot,
The rot is setting in!
Seething underneath,
Just beneath the skin,
The death,
The dread is marching on,
Singing from ruined throats,
A tyrants mournful song,
You get out,
What you put in,
When you work for death,
You earn the wages of sin!




posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 04:28 AM
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Brutal

Savage


Love it Brit!



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 04:31 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Thank you very much JinMI!

*clink*



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 06:32 AM
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I had to read it twice to get the feel.
Now I love it!
THX!!



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 06:39 AM
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Set to music that would be great death metal song .



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 07:11 AM
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a reply to: DogMeat

Thank YOU!


a reply to: VengefulGhost

You know, that's not a surprise to me, because I was hearing some intense drumming in my head while I wrote it, which is why the cadence is partially disarticulated. Thanks for your feedback!



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 08:25 PM
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DooM porn .. right on eh!

Nice.



posted on Nov, 26 2016 @ 10:51 PM
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a reply to: TrueBrit

Excellent, per usual.


Totally agree that it would also work as an metal song.



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