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I Dreamt, Not Anymore

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posted on Nov, 3 2016 @ 12:52 AM
I dreamt she died
Lord how I cried
To hear the maiden was
Not anymore.

The tears they ran
Down my fear-ful face
I thought I heard her whisper she loves me
Not anymore.

I jolted out of bed
Bolted to the door
To answer a knock that knocked
No more.

Once I loved a maiden whose skin was fair, and hair was fine
Her lips, bloody red, mine to kiss, her body knew my caress, her heart beating past her breast beat for me no more.
edit on 3-11-2016 by ksiezyc because: (no reason given)

posted on Nov, 4 2016 @ 10:53 PM
Awwww, sad poem! Nicely done though!

posted on Nov, 22 2016 @ 03:25 AM
a reply to: ksiezyc

If I Was A Hare...
I'd Be Aware...
And Thump Before Despair...
To Alarm The One Who'd Dare...
For She Alone Would Care!
Why O'Lord Am I Not Am I Not A Hare!?!....

Inspired By "Ksiezyc"...
edit on 22-11-2016 by Pinocchio because: Star & Flag O'Pal...

posted on Nov, 22 2016 @ 03:33 AM
a reply to: ksiezyc

I loved it. Did you write this? It's amazingly good. You are a true writer ksiezyc!

posted on Nov, 22 2016 @ 10:02 AM
a reply to: LadyButterfly

I wouldn't have shared if I didn't write it! Not without proper credit given anyways!

posted on Nov, 22 2016 @ 10:03 AM
a reply to: Pinocchio

Sounds nice Pinocchio! Good to see you again.

posted on Nov, 22 2016 @ 11:07 AM
a reply to: ksiezyc

Thanks O'Pal....
I Looked For You Using Member Search.

I Also Figured Out Something.... So I PM'd You.

posted on Nov, 24 2016 @ 12:25 AM
a reply to: Pinocchio

I haven't gotten any PM from you! If you want to post it here, no one will see anyways, or resend.

Ah you sought me out. I wonder how hard that was with my name.

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