posted on Oct, 29 2016 @ 07:00 AM
a reply to: Blue2K4
Seriously - is this a novel you are pitching to us?
Perhaps this belongs in short stories instead of here. Because your seeming 'novelty' here will wear off very soon indeed. If you were an ascended
master messenger from Mars, sent here to help - why on earth would you pick ATS?
Because we tolerate such stuff for a little bit, and will humor you?
If you honestly believe these things you are saying in the OP (and your other thread), you need to see a professional.
If you are testing out a new premise for a series on Netflix, then you are presenting it all wrong. Present it as what it is: An idea, a synopsis and
outline for a work of fiction you are writing.
Like Dune. If Frank Herbert had written Dune one thread at a time on ATS, he would have been moved to the Short Stories forum, or ignored. There
might be agents or publishers on ATS, even lurkers who steal our ideas and turn them into viral sensations. But your presentation needs a lot of work
if that's your hope (to be discovered).
Other websites would be better suited for your prose, as well, and you might consider having someone edit your work for easier reading (break up the
text into paragraphs, etc).
Make no mistake, there are hundreds of us who would love for someone to come and tell us things like this is a way that we can believe it. But your
way isn't working. Give Bashar a call, maybe? He's very convincing.
edit on 10/29/2016 by BuzzyWigs because: (no reason given)