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Walking down a hill

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posted on Oct, 28 2016 @ 12:46 AM
As I was walking my pain lied
It lied in a riverside of fear
Time took place of life
Life in the this place has time

Fear of life is a foot of the past
The past is a fear of the future
The minds eye sees hope of the pain
Pain of the mind has it own eye

City of sins bring hope of love
Love fears the sin of this city
Life is a mode of happiness
Happiness is how we should live life

As I walked down a hill
My life changed
Love for this world found fear
Fear of love brings good into this world

This is about living the dream of your life. We can change.

posted on Oct, 28 2016 @ 01:34 AM
a reply to: Jdennis10

I never usually read the poets section before this past couple of weeks.

Life can hit you sometimes but change is good when you're with someone who cares and loves you.

Don't let this world get you down.

You are Amazing and your Poetry touched me deeply. And i've only written a few poems in my life.

Thank you for your amazing inspiration.

posted on Oct, 28 2016 @ 01:36 AM
a reply to: Encryptor

Now you write one that comes from the heart.
edit on 28-10-2016 by Jdennis10 because: (no reason given)

posted on Oct, 28 2016 @ 03:34 AM

originally posted by: Jdennis10
a reply to: Encryptor

Now you write one sir.

Writing from my heart always comes naturally.

I'm so glad you noticed i wrote from my heart, i'm so heart driven and i love justice!.. Most people are too dense to notice.

You rock...

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