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posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 07:01 PM
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Play your strings
play them loud,
Continuous sound
frequent crowds.

Ever there never far
piercing through
To barriers drowned,
the emblazoned drew.

Dancing with the Devil
i knew, as sounds of
undone demons sung
from a rift of clouds above.

Temptation grabbed me
by the strings
Hammering did i unto thee
higher and higher piercing rings.

The music dropped out suddenly
as i froze in sudden death
The sound of deep despair did stop
I close my eyes, one last breath.


edit on 9/17/2016 by awareness10 because: (no reason given)




posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 07:14 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Very nice!!!



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 07:15 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thank you Kindly!!



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 08:23 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Awesome!



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 08:33 PM
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a reply to: Antwonzilla

Thank you for that~



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 08:35 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Im new on the block do you have any other songs? Do you play instruments or just write im just curious sorry to pry!? No disrespect meant or anything
edit on 17-9-2016 by Antwonzilla because: (no reason given)



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 08:49 PM
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a reply to: Antwonzilla

hi there welcome to the Zoo! I have a guitar, my strings are broken atm however, no worries. I write everything from my head, in about 5-10 mins. purely for my own entertainment but would sell a few if I were given the chance. Thanks for asking.



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 08:54 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I play a bit myself a little guitar and bass me and my buddies used to jam but grew apart id love to get involved again and always like seeing other people's work kudos to you on the great song! Ironicallymy guitar only has two strings on it at the moment haha!



posted on Sep, 17 2016 @ 09:06 PM
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a reply to: Antwonzilla

That's cool, thanks again for that, it's actually a poem but i suppose it could be turned into a song as well though right. Once a guitar string breaks it's near impossible for me to fix them. Youtube!



posted on Sep, 18 2016 @ 07:43 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Youtube is my go to for anything nowadays ha tobad they have all those ads now




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