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posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 10:05 PM
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Behind your eyes
i see your mind
Forever gazing
ever kind

Filled with ghosts
of demons past
Still come to me
never last

That darkened place
once haunted me
But now is gone
into the sea

A calming peace
has now begun
Stirred within
a course now run

Never again
will it return
Fading silence
as it burns...
©
edit on 9/16/2016 by awareness10 because: @@#$%^




posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 10:07 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Durn Tootin!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 10:08 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Excellent poem!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 10:48 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

lol indeedy!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 10:48 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thankyou, my last poem was Eggcellent!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:00 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

into the sea.....

Robert Smith and the rest of the Cure could have made this into a killer song...

Good stuff.




posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:06 PM
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a reply to: BestinShow

You have it right



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:07 PM
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a reply to: BestinShow

Awesome, thanks for that

If i could make a living writing songs for bands, i'd do it in a heart beat!




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