By far and away my very favorite short-story you've written.
If you'd like, I have some story lines to give you. I could write from them but.........I'm nowhere as good as you are in parsing the words. Let me
know if you want one of them. My story lines tend to run to the bizarre and strange with a need for gritty details to bring them to life. I'm too
old for the task at this point in my life.
Thank you, Tony! I so appreciate you taking the time to read it (and all the others!).
It is great to have your feedback and support. This story is one of my favorites, too, and I really felt the story as I wrote it - the sensory
experience as well as the emotional. I am glad some of it was conveyed in the telling!
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