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The Visit [SEWC]

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posted on Sep, 11 2016 @ 05:05 PM
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The Visit

I saw a measurement of time today
Slowly but gracefully inching it's way
It tickled me quietly with a greeting
I was pleasantly surprised by our meeting
I quickly grasped it with my hand
Then replaced it back to it's woodland
That it could travel the silk road
& so it could return to its abode
I thought of the treasures it came to give
Also the force that created it to live
All though the creature is now gone for today
It made me think about it’s future foray
This creature is a pillar of delight
One that will soon fly back into sight
I'm so happy it came for a visit
It was so eloquently exquisite


leolady




posted on Sep, 11 2016 @ 05:40 PM
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a reply to: leolady

Seems like you had a good time.

Thanks for the poem.



posted on Sep, 12 2016 @ 02:47 PM
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That was so Eloquently Equisite.
Beautiful Poetry



posted on Sep, 12 2016 @ 03:25 PM
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Very nice, S&F.


edit on 12-9-2016 by AugustusMasonicus because: networkdude has no beer



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:46 AM
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a reply to: leolady

This is really lovely, leolady! Thank you!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 03:37 PM
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a reply to: leolady

This is very good! Thank You for submitting this!! S+F!!



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:12 PM
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a reply to: leolady

Awesome writing



posted on Sep, 16 2016 @ 11:40 PM
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It gave you the moment and you weaved us it's silk



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