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netherworld dreamer

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posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:02 PM
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black pools form cascading water
shimmering in the light of day
the tunnel has ended, daylight descends
my mind is finding its way

the dark abyss of endless sorrow
a prisoner for so long
im staring at the sunshine
hearing the mountain song

she glides among the fields of fern
around the starry pine
the flowing wraps of a long white gown
freezes her into time

i stare at her reflection within the crystal pool
how perfect, how kind, she gazes at a fool

suddenly i realize

the pool fragments her face

no matter the amount of love i feel
i can never enter this place

fore i am just the dreamer
who see's her in my sleep
and she is just an image
i pray my mind will keep




posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:03 PM
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a reply to: autopat51

Beautiful and sad.

Love story?



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:03 PM
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a reply to: autopat51

Nice one, sad and beautiful.
edit on 8 28 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:08 PM
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Wow! Beautiful, sad and haunting. Loved this!!



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:19 PM
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my poems tend to be dark
but beg for the light
thank you



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 04:43 PM
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originally posted by: autopat51
my poems tend to be dark
but beg for the light
thank you


It is through the darkness that we sometimes find the light.

I really loved your poem!



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 07:39 PM
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a reply to: autopat51

Hauntingly deep and decisive.



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 07:39 PM
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Wow-I think I know what you are looking for-and I think you find her-because you want to.



posted on Aug, 28 2016 @ 07:43 PM
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I don't often comment in the short stories section, never quite knowing what to say, there's only so many times you can say to people, "Wow! I loved it!"

But.. I really reeeeally liked your poem! Thank you so much for sharing it



posted on Aug, 29 2016 @ 12:28 PM
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thank you all for the kind words



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