Don't you hate working on the weekends?

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posted on Jan, 26 2005 @ 08:19 PM
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Good work. Especially liked that part where he resolved his conflict with a gun. Apple pie and the American way, all on one page.





posted on Jan, 26 2005 @ 08:27 PM
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Well amuk I managed to "persuade" my husband into taking me with him next week on his "business" trip I am going with him for 3 days.


You planted the seed on my hart so now I have to find out.


By the way I will pick my daughter on our way so she can keep me company "just in case"



posted on Feb, 27 2005 @ 09:44 PM
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Well I think thats sweet M.

Anyway back to work again-lol.



posted on Feb, 28 2005 @ 06:41 PM
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Thats really awesome man, keep on writing



posted on Mar, 12 2005 @ 08:21 PM
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What can I say-lol

Good work, dont know about the resaerch though



posted on Mar, 17 2005 @ 02:29 PM
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i like the story and i hate working on wknds



posted on Mar, 17 2005 @ 02:47 PM
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I am so happy everybody enjoyed that short story. I for one did too However, I found half way through I was reading too much. Although it had a good plot, I found the amount of information was a little much after the second paragraph

Just some critisism for ya. dont mean to offend. I am no writer by all means but I enjoy a good read, and yours was interesting.



posted on Mar, 17 2005 @ 03:02 PM
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That was the point, to bore you with his rather dull life before you found out what he really did.



posted on Mar, 17 2005 @ 03:31 PM
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but it is a good story



posted on Mar, 19 2005 @ 11:53 PM
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I hate jobs that make me work on the weekends like mcdonalds and other chain food restaurants



posted on Mar, 28 2005 @ 09:50 PM
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I know this the bank holiday, but I thought why not?

Anyway have fun, I l know I will.


Ramble Ramble!-lol.



posted on Apr, 29 2005 @ 09:48 PM
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Double post. Oh dear


Right back to what I was saying.

I dont like working weekends, but someone has to do it



posted on May, 2 2005 @ 05:04 PM
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wow, this is the first short story i have read on ats, and i want more now because of you. I hope you keep on posting.... im at a loss of words



posted on May, 7 2005 @ 07:38 PM
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Well I have to work this sunday, shame!

Good story though



posted on Feb, 23 2006 @ 12:08 PM
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I had to bump this for a friend that couldnt find it aand wanted to read it





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