posted on Mar, 17 2005 @ 02:47 PM
I am so happy everybody enjoyed that short story. I for one did too However, I found half way through I was reading too much. Although it had a good
plot, I found the amount of information was a little much after the second paragraph
Just some critisism for ya. dont mean to offend. I am no writer by all means but I enjoy a good read, and yours was interesting.