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THE FOREST IN ME

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posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 06:41 PM
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[just for reference, I do NOT wage a lot of time and energy from my postings, they come out...fluidly with very little pause, but directly from my heart, that is MY writing style, NOT to be confused with professional writers......[smirk]

The Forest In Me

As I find myself along the road, I finally picked up my head
instead, of looking at the pine needles on the ground
still looking for away to get around....here

Comfortable and content and yet, still searching
the path for
I guess I don't really know
Searching the the path for
I guess looking for more

Once there was a path that I dreamed of
it was wonderous, full of love and dreams
from above

Am I lost, or have I been been found
listening, listening for a sound
Knowing I will continue, strength abounds
I sometimes wish YOU were around

Open and free, walking amongst the trees
feeling free. free. free. Oh the magistry
and fullness of the visual sensation
without hesitation, I look around and smile
in anticipation of the next turn of the path

A fullness of thanksgiving fills my being
not knowing, just a person willing
to let it all go
and open up to what else I will be allowed
to know

Love, Love, Love, Love, Love
Oh boy, did I just say that, well now you
know there is nothing else i could of
said...Love


Peace and Love

KD

edit on 22-8-2016 by Darkinsider because: spelling




posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 06:50 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

I logged back in to find this.
This.
So perfect for my moment.
Memories of Dad and walking in the woods hand and hand. Slowly moving and listening.
Moving now through the woods, slowly and listening.

Being still in the moment.

It is fantastic and thank you!



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 06:54 PM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: Darkinsider

I logged back in to find this.
This.
So perfect for my moment.
Memories of Dad and walking in the woods hand and hand. Slowly moving and listening.
Moving now through the woods, slowly and listening.

Being still in the moment.

It is fantastic and thank you!


Oh my loving Chirp. Thank you so much....I know what you mean so exactly. Thank you.

Peace and Love


KD
edit on 22-8-2016 by Darkinsider because: added comment



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 07:23 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider




[just for reference, I do NOT wage a lot of time and energy from my postings, they come out...fluidly with very little pause, but directly from my heart, that is MY writing style, NOT to be confused with professional writers......[smirk]


Let me apologize to anyone who may have felt I was a bit smug. I am sorry. All I was really to convey was that I am impulsive and undisciplined in formal writing and poetry. I greatly appreciate and appreciate your apptitude and adroitness to detail and creativity. I really do. Mine is more random and less guarded.

Please accept my sincerest apologies if I offended anyone.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 07:51 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

That was amazing!!!



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 07:53 PM
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originally posted by: Darkinsider
a reply to: Darkinsider




[just for reference, I do NOT wage a lot of time and energy from my postings, they come out...fluidly with very little pause, but directly from my heart, that is MY writing style, NOT to be confused with professional writers......[smirk]


Let me apologize to anyone who may have felt I was a bit smug. I am sorry. All I was really to convey was that I am impulsive and undisciplined in formal writing and poetry. I greatly appreciate and appreciate your apptitude and adroitness to detail and creativity. I really do. Mine is more random and less guarded.

Please accept my sincerest apologies if I offended anyone.

Peace and Love

KD


I didn't, personally, find you smug.
We all write in different ways and for different reasons.
Because someone is 'professional' and being 'paid' doesn't necessarily make their words any more important to me than anyone else's if I can't relate or find interest in them.
When I write (loose term) it is to entertain, purge feelings/emotions/or life situations or just ramble on sort of like now...




posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 07:55 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Right on Chirp, I like how you put that. Everyone is different and poems have many meanings!



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 08:13 PM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird

originally posted by: Darkinsider
a reply to: Darkinsider




[just for reference, I do NOT wage a lot of time and energy from my postings, they come out...fluidly with very little pause, but directly from my heart, that is MY writing style, NOT to be confused with professional writers......[smirk]


Let me apologize to anyone who may have felt I was a bit smug. I am sorry. All I was really to convey was that I am impulsive and undisciplined in formal writing and poetry. I greatly appreciate and appreciate your apptitude and adroitness to detail and creativity. I really do. Mine is more random and less guarded.

Please accept my sincerest apologies if I offended anyone.

Peace and Love

KD


I didn't, personally, find you smug.
We all write in different ways and for different reasons.
Because someone is 'professional' and being 'paid' doesn't necessarily make their words any more important to me than anyone else's if I can't relate or find interest in them.
When I write (loose term) it is to entertain, purge feelings/emotions/or life situations or just ramble on sort of like now...



You are just a sweetheart. Thank you Chirp......sending [hugs and kisses]

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 22 2016 @ 08:14 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Darkinsider

That was amazing!!!


Thank you brother for taking the time to read my poem.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 24 2016 @ 02:25 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider


Love this!



posted on Aug, 30 2016 @ 04:44 AM
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originally posted by: KTemplar
a reply to: Darkinsider


Love this!



Thank you so much KTemplar for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem.

Peace

KD



posted on Sep, 11 2016 @ 09:25 AM
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NOT to be confused with professional writers......[smirk]


I'm not a professional writer , I got this title just because I like to spew all my psychological emotions ,ideas and my inevitable curiosity for almost everything on paper , in this case digital paper that people can read here ..

I've discovered writing here ,something I knew I possessed in my own language, but never in English.

I had many complaints about my English when I came here so I tried to improve that by start writing threads and stories .

But, also my haritage of my ancestors are pushing me into this corner .

A nephew of my wife's ,he does ginialogy as profession and found out that my ancestors were Scottish/British decendant, guess that's why I love bagpipe music " pls don't tell anyone "


I still like English writing a lot and I hope people understand what I try to express.

Maybe I'll write a book someday or just all my short stories bundled into one..




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