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posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 07:01 PM
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The Plum

My sugary sweet, juicy plum,
Your nectar fresh upon my tongue.
Lips pressed upon your succulent skin,
You quench the thirst I have within.

And I indulge in your succulent flavor,
Each bite I take from your flesh I savor,
Because I know, that soon it will end,
And I'll never know such delight again.

I hungered.. and you satiated me.
I drank from your juices, passionately.
Devoured you, selfishly, and unabashed,
Until my hunger had finally past.


Thanks,
blend57

edit on 20-8-2016 by blend57 because: (no reason given)




posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 07:03 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Is it wrong to think of a lover instead of the fruit?

Either way I love it!




posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 07:10 PM
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TNMockingbird

A poem can bring many thoughts to your mind..Can be A plum or a lover..whichever best suits you. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my writing!

blend57



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 07:29 PM
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a reply to: blend57


Most erotic poem I've ever read about plums, nice



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 08:48 PM
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a reply to: blend57

As always great writing



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 09:44 PM
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KTemplar

And a plum will no longer be just a plum anymore..


Quantum12

Thank you.. I'm glad you liked it..

Thanks,
blend57



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 09:46 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Sensual blend, amazing!



posted on Aug, 21 2016 @ 07:54 AM
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Thank you awareness10, for taking the time to read it and comment.

Thanks,
blend57



posted on Aug, 21 2016 @ 08:00 AM
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a reply to: blend57


Your writings are so raw and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.



posted on Aug, 21 2016 @ 09:22 AM
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Thank you for the compliment JinMI. Poetry is an obsession of mine. I write a ton, and sometimes post it here... A nice place to share thoughts and creative ideas.. and I love reading the creative works of others as well..


Again, thanks for taking the time to read my words,

blend57




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