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posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 04:02 PM
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OCEANS

Oceans of emotions are overpowering me
as I dream of you

Waves are hitting the shore of my heart that
urges for the touch of you

Up and down, in and out, mind spinning, running
all about....you

Simple, easy ways of feeling now envelope me
Unlike complicated, misstated, imitated, stars
that shine on and on

Simple, easy ways of feeling now envelope me
Unlike complicated, misstated, imitated, stars
that shine on and on

The claps of waves approve of my love for you
they thunder with unending motion like the love I
have for you

Oceans of emotions are overpowering me
as I dream of you
Waves of feelings and thoughts of my love
for you

My love for you, my love for you, my love for
you


Peace and Love
KD


edit on 19-8-2016 by Darkinsider because: a

edit on 19-8-2016 by Darkinsider because: spelling




posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 04:40 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

That was awesome!



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 04:45 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Darkinsider

That was awesome!


Thank you brother, straight from the heart. Sumthin' about "Oceans of Emotions" I cannot shake....just because. LOL

Peace

KD



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 05:42 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

I agree with Quant well done K D!



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 05:51 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

I like it, very expressive and distinct writing.




posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 05:53 PM
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originally posted by: awareness10
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I agree with Quant well done K D!


Thank you so much awareness for taking the time to read my poem/song.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 05:55 PM
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originally posted by: JinMI
a reply to: Darkinsider

I like it, very expressive and distinct writing.


Ah thank you so much JinMi. I really appreciate that....and thank you for reading my poem/song.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 05:58 PM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

Your very welcome, here and in the others. Thank you for taking the time to share, many of us here enjoy reading.



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 06:04 PM
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originally posted by: JinMI
a reply to: Darkinsider

Your very welcome, here and in the others. Thank you for taking the time to share, many of us here enjoy reading.



Thank you. It all comes straight from my heart.



posted on Aug, 19 2016 @ 11:49 PM
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Another nice one!



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 03:47 AM
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originally posted by: Night Star
Another nice one!


Thank you Nkht now do you remember who I am?

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 20 2016 @ 11:58 AM
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originally posted by: Darkinsider

originally posted by: Night Star
Another nice one!


Thank you Nkht now do you remember who I am?

Peace and Love

KD


Yes I do.



posted on Sep, 5 2016 @ 04:03 AM
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a reply to: Darkinsider
I don't read many of these. Very nice.



posted on Sep, 5 2016 @ 04:06 AM
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originally posted by: intrptr
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I don't read many of these. Very nice.


Thank you very much. I have recently had a desire to just write, and most of threads come out fluidly with very little adjustment.

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and responding. Have a great day!!

Peace

KD



posted on Sep, 5 2016 @ 04:12 AM
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a reply to: Darkinsider

Thats what I was wondering. I struggle to make words meet. If that flows from you like that. You're a song writer if you didn't know that already.



posted on Sep, 5 2016 @ 04:26 AM
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originally posted by: intrptr
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Thats what I was wondering. I struggle to make words meet. If that flows from you like that. You're a song writer if you didn't know that already.


Thank you for that. I do consider most of my writings poems/songs. I did have another one, slips my mind, but someone emphatically responded that I should turn it into a song. Sometimes when I write, there may be a melody and/or beat that allows me to flow the words, almost a duality of words and a melody in my mind, then I simply write.

I deeply appreciate your kind words.

Peace
KD



posted on Sep, 5 2016 @ 04:33 AM
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ometimes when I write, there may be a melody and/or beat that allows me to flow the words, almost a duality of words and a melody in my mind, then I simply write.

I could almost hear the beat while I was reading it. It flows. That why I suggested you are a song writer.




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