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Kings and Castles...

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Quantum12

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 12:50 PM
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Kings and Castles live on for ever,
The iron of ageless times took our king away.

Our castle of darkness sits beneath the sea of misery,
Where are you thou King of the universe.

As voices screamed our king reappeared as a ghost,
Many saw this moment as the end of times.

The king assured us that life is ageless to the strong,
Only the insulted victims of earth go to the underworld.

One night the ghost of the king said "By kingdom come to the people of this universe shall every soul know my great name, I am thee who takes you away for eternity."
Poof as his ghost left we all turned back into dust...👅

edit on 8 15 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)


TNMockingbird

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 01:02 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Kind of scary one there.

It's a little different from your usual and I like it.


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 01:05 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Someone PM me to write a dark story so I tried it lol. I kindly thank you for reading it Chirp! That means a lot to me. Have a great day!


intrptr

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 02:14 PM
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Every castle is a fortress hiding a vault filled wth treasure, and a dungeon.

Either you pay us 'royalty' or into the dungeon you go.
edit on 15-8-2016 by intrptr because: spelling


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 02:16 PM
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a reply to: intrptr

Lol that was excellent writing!


intrptr

posted on Aug, 15 2016 @ 02:23 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You inspired it.


SyxPak

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 10:14 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

I like this Dark Tale Q! It's Very good!!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 10:57 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you kind dragon!!!


SyxPak

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 11:46 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You are Welcome Q!


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 12:26 PM
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I really appreciate you reading this.


TheKnightofDoom

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 12:29 PM
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Ï think you are describing my house.
The castle of doom.
Good talent you have there.


Quantum12

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 12:35 PM
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a reply to: TheKnightofDoom

I bet your castle is amazing.👍


SyxPak

posted on Aug, 16 2016 @ 12:57 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Hey Bro.
I always enjoy reading Your Poems and Stories!
You have a great imagination!!



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