Must everything be so technical with you? LOL! Your work is amazing and I am in awe, whether that means your writing needs work or not doesn't matter.
I don't think it needs to be re-done in any way. What matters is how you paint those poems with words so damned well!
edit on 8-9-2016 by Night Star because: (no reason given)
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