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posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 07:34 PM
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Drifting sadness
doors through time.
Endless waiting
never mine.

Always looking
for that day,
When i am free
to be with You.

Wandering souls,
searching hearts;
Painful goodbyes
never cease.

A love forbidden,
in this time;
Indentured rites
almost signed.

Haunting memories,
of your face.
From yesterday
cannot erase.

My love an ocean,
never ends.
For you right now,
and ever on.

Release my mind,
of all it's dread;
Into your calming
presence led.

Written in Honor of Loves lost.
Awareness 1.0
edit on 8/6/2016 by awareness10 because: time slip.




posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 07:43 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

That was beautiful to me! Thank you!



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 07:53 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thankyou Quantum, it was somewhat personal for me.






posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 07:55 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I could tell it was. Your a beautiful person!



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 07:56 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You're so sweet, thankyou for that.
If you get the chance to watch the Video i think you'll like it.

It brought tears to my eyes..



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 08:07 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I am going to watch it in ten min. Just finishing cooking.



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 08:24 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

okie



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 09:19 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I cried too. Emotional!



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 09:40 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

aww my friend, you have such a good and kind heart.




posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 10:57 PM
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Dedicated to all who have lost a loved one to
a death. May they R.I.P.



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 11:34 PM
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I am always touched by your poems! I have lost many people in my life and it saddens me deeply, yet we all have the same fate and will leave this world behind to go on to something better one day. It is those of us left behind who must carry the deep pain and sorrow of having to say goodbye.



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 11:48 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thankyou Night Star my other Sister here on ATS now I have 3!

I lost my soulmate and two family members 3mths apart. It nearly killed me too much of a burden to carry alone. I too am sorry for your loss, the pain never really leaves your soul. You carry it with you and bear it as best you can, you're right.



posted on Aug, 7 2016 @ 12:14 AM
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a reply to: awareness10


OMG, how very tragic for you! Bad enough to lose someone you love, but so close together like that is even harder! My heart goes out to you. Hugs Sister!



posted on Aug, 7 2016 @ 05:35 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thankyou Star, Hugs



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 05:07 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Sheer excellence!

Your words draw people in. I don't wish it upon anyone, but your pain has healing properties. Raw and as real as it gets, cheers to you.




posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 05:39 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

That means a lot to me, Thankyou!

It's very healing writing it down this way,





...Now it's your turn, i'm 2 up on ya



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 05:40 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I've got a few on the burner. I'll get all these words sorted out in a readable fashion sometime tonight!



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 05:43 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

I can't wait to read yours! You too are a brilliant writer, your last one blew me away!
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