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posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 04:22 PM
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Never far from Paradise,
He's always close yet never near.

Always Pushing one direction,
Never asking my opinion.

Like a trophy such a win,
Nothing honorable in it's whim.

Soon that too fades and all is done,
Ending swiftly with a gun.

My body floats up peacefully,
My life is done, now i am free.

Dreadfully dark i know
nah not really.

edit on 8/5/2016 by awareness10 because: (no reason given)




posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 04:34 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I liked it! That was deep to me!



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 04:35 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thankyou
I probably should have made a career writing songs for metal bands instead lol.




posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 04:50 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

You should now write songs for bands!!!



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 05:04 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

May be an idea there. Half my influence came from listening to bands like Metallica.



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 07:33 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Is there ever honor in whim? I don't see a connection between those concepts.

You are a terrific writer. Very talented.



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 07:40 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Nice writing my friend. If it's dark to you then it's dark, if it's not an others see it as dark, well it's still not dark!

I like it.




posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 07:41 PM
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a reply to: Profusion

She is a great writer and your kind to tell her.
edit on 8 5 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 08:37 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

I'm glad you liked it, thanks Jin!

Thanks to everyone appreciate it!



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 08:40 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

My next poem is for you my good hearted friend.



posted on Aug, 5 2016 @ 08:43 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

That's so sweet of you i can't wait to see it!!




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