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Majesty of Love

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posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 01:52 PM
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The world has majesty
Joy and wonder
That strikes like lighting
And roars like thunder
Everything has potential
Mysteries full of wonder
Because you are in it
Because you are in it

Without you, there is void
No light to find my way
No songs to lift my heart
Long and bitter days
Nothing has reason
Rhyme or purpose
Without you
Without you

You are the magic that lights my world
You and you alone
Are the soul that cured
All the suffering
And the despair left
All the loneliness
And together, wept
In happiness
Because with you
I can accept
The mystery, the unknowing
Of every uncertain step

Because you are with me.
Because you are with me.




posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 01:56 PM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

Great writing!



posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 02:58 PM
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Beautiful writing



posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 03:03 PM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

It's a song?



posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 03:56 PM
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originally posted by: tikbalang
a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

It's a song?


It's about his dearest friend in all the world. I'd love to see someone make a song from it!



posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 03:59 PM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2


You know I have always been touched by your poems. There have been many and they all take my breath away. So beautiful!






posted on Aug, 3 2016 @ 04:15 PM
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originally posted by: LoneCloudHopper2
The world has majesty
Joy and wonder
That strikes like lighting
And roars like thunder
Everything has potential
Mysteries full of wonder
Because you are in it
Because you are in it



Without you, there is void
No light to find my way
No songs to lift my heart
Long and bitter days
Nothing has reason
Rhyme or purpose
Without you
Without you

You are the magic that lights my world
You and you alone
Are the soul that cured
All the suffering
And the despair left
All the loneliness
And together, wept
In happiness
Because with you
I can accept
The mystery, the unknowing
Of every uncertain step

Because you are with me.
Because you are with me.


Precious!

I thought of Jesus Christ and what He's like to me when I read this!



posted on Aug, 4 2016 @ 01:19 AM
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Thank you so much for your comments! I have been a writer for a long time and it's always good to hear positive feedback!


The poem was written for my good friend and soul mate, Night Star
We've been through a lot together and I have no idea where I'd be today if it wasn't for her.



posted on Aug, 4 2016 @ 01:20 AM
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a reply to: WhiteWingedMonolith

The great thing about poetry is that it touches all in different ways and can mean different things to different people



posted on Aug, 4 2016 @ 01:25 AM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2


We have indeed been through a lot together and I will forever be grateful for having found you, for having you in my life. Thank you so much Honey! HUGS!



posted on Aug, 4 2016 @ 01:25 PM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

Beautiful Poem for a Wonderful Person! Very well done!!



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 01:39 AM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you!



posted on Aug, 6 2016 @ 10:03 AM
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a reply to: LoneCloudHopper2

You are Very Welcome!!



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