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posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:44 PM
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I Said

The words that I said, seemed to be important
words that remain in your head, that resonate and
that you come back to, that seem so special to you

Twisting and twirling, churning and spinning, whipping and spirling
flowing and winding
Are those the endless words that you heard I said
up into the void of the vortex

Oh I beg of you please don't take them back
do not put them back, or that place you love to hide
afterall, they are just words, no they did not just fall
from the sky

They were for you and just for you
a gift, a present that you could use

My words, your words our words, Oh words
For laughing and for crying out loud
we use them while alone or in a crowd

Oh the release. The Freedom to just let it all go
They are the words I said, for everyone to know
No, no please do not go just now
I want you, you need to know, just how many more
I want you, I want you to adore


Peace and Love
KD




posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:45 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Awesome!



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:45 PM
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Make this into a song



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:47 PM
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So sweet-leaving me with more questions than answers....and I like that. Kudos.



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:48 PM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours

Awesome!


Thanks so much brother Qman.



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:49 PM
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originally posted by: luciferslight
Make this into a song


Thank you. I know, sometimes it feels that is what I am doing, I just need to strike the correct chords. Thank you.



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 07:51 PM
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originally posted by: Justso
So sweet-leaving me with more questions than answers....and I like that. Kudos.


Thank you Justso, so glad you enjoyed.

KD



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 09:52 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Wonderful words.

Very heartfelt




posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 09:56 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

That was deep. Like a lifting from all the worries and cares of this world.

Excellent writing KD

Peace.



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 09:57 PM
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Thank you Chirp! I always appreciate your feedback. Thank you for reading this song/poem.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 10:04 PM
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originally posted by: awareness10
a reply to: thenightisours

That was deep. Like a lifting from all the worries and cares of this world.

Excellent writing KD

Peace.


Yes Aware! Truly inspired from within and without....so glad to see you and I am happy that you understand.

Peace and Love

KD



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