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The Man with Two Faces

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posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 10:47 PM
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Darkened skies many lies.
There was a Man who seldom cried;
For any cept' his own chides.

A song of glory upon himself,
Full of sh't and full of strife;
He wielded forth his damaged sword.
And placed it deep into my heart.

A Vengeful Man so full of wrath,
That is the the cry of his swathing crap;
Leaving Women broken in his path.

As i turned away and left with haste,
From the Man with two faces
His Jealousy has but many paths;
And two faced lies, another Mask.
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posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 10:51 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Hey aware, that is very pointed and strong. Feelings of anger and understanding where they came from. Nice writing, really enjoy seeing you here.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 10:54 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Hey thanks KD and likewise


Anger is but a whisper in the wind that soon becomes nothing more than a whimper, until it too has passed into the gallows of death itself.

Peace



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 10:58 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Wow, pretty strong.
Thanks for sharing, i got shivers.
(Looking over my shoulders)👍
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posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:00 PM
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originally posted by: awareness10
a reply to: thenightisours

Hey thanks KD and likewise


Anger is but a whisper in the wind that soon becomes nothing more than a whimper, until it too has passed into the gallows of death itself.

Peace


That is so profound. It draws me to my beliefs and things I have learned, like: "All Things Must Pass"

just me KD falling back to my strengths.......Peace and Love



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:05 PM
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originally posted by: Bigburgh
a reply to: awareness10

Wow, pretty strong.
Thanks for sharing, i got shivers.
(Looking over my shoulders)👍


Thankyou for the feedback, i appreciate it!




posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:09 PM
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originally posted by: thenightisours

originally posted by: awareness10
a reply to: thenightisours

Hey thanks KD and likewise


Anger is but a whisper in the wind that soon becomes nothing more than a whimper, until it too has passed into the gallows of death itself.

Peace


That is so profound. It draws me to my beliefs and things I have learned, like: "All Things Must Pass"

just me KD falling back to my strengths.......Peace and Love


This is when one rises to the occasion. We often do not know our own strengths until we are tested.

Peace KD



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:22 PM
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I liked it alot, Very good! Filled with real emotion



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:42 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

Thankyou for that, I really do appreciate the comments, its good insight.




posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 12:16 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Amazing and haunting.

Memories and lies.

Thank you Aware!




posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 12:25 AM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: awareness10

Amazing and haunting.

Memories and lies.

Thank you Aware!



For sure Chirp



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 12:53 AM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: awareness10

Amazing and haunting.

Memories and lies.

Thank you Aware!



Thankyou TN,

Haunting is a good word for it!




posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 03:54 AM
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Love your works!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 05:07 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Powerful!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 11:32 AM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thankyou!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 11:32 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thankyou too




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