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I know I am in some Pain

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posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 09:44 PM
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Pain

I know I'm in some pain
really difficult to explain
I guess I just did it again

When I caressed you and held you in my arms
I felt you pull me tight, like you never
wanted to let go, let go

Gave you my heart all of it and more
I guess it wasn't enough, how was I to know

Gave you my heart all of it and more
why did'nt I see I needed to give more

It all is the same, I went and played the game
and gave it my all
Which apparently is not worth much at all

I know I am in pain, i did it again
Gave you my love, gave you my touch gave all
That I had to give......to you

That was my choice, no regrets and nothing to forgive
just caught off guard didn't see it coming, didn't have a clue
I gave it my all, I gave you my heart I gave it all to you

I know I am in some pain
now maybe I can explain

I know I am in some pain
now maybe I can explain

I did it to myself, I left my doors and windows
wide open, nothin' to hide
But you had secrets, secrets I still do not
understand

Not bitter, just doing a self exam
I know that even in this pain I'm still a good
man

I know I am in pain, i did it again
Gave you my love, gave you my touch gave all
That I had to give

So let the pain do its' drain, that is a healthy
thing

I did it again and now I can explain



Peace and Love
KD


edit on 31-7-2016 by thenightisours because: sentence structure




posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 09:55 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours Hey Night! This is an awsome poem, I trully love it. It has structure, but still dances like tongues of fire.



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 10:01 PM
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originally posted by: visitedbythem
a reply to: thenightisours Hey Night! This is an awsome poem, I trully love it. It has structure, but still dances like tongues of fire.




Thank you Vman....between you and Qman.....I just made it easier. I appreciate your comments and that means a lot to me. So happy you read the poem. Glad it made some sense.....sometimes not sure what will come out of this head. LOL




Peace

You can just always call me KD



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:19 PM
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KD i agree, that was an awesome piece of writing!

Deep and Thought Provoking





posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 11:43 PM
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originally posted by: awareness10
KD i agree, that was an awesome piece of writing!

Deep and Thought Provoking



Thank you again awareness. Like most, if not all. Something happens and I have the overwhelming desire to express in the tightest terms possibly what I am feeling. I am happy you enjoyed it and felt deeply about it.

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 12:13 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Very strong emotions.

Well done, I enjoyed it even if it evoked sadness.




posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 12:17 AM
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originally posted by: TNMockingbird
a reply to: thenightisours

Very strong emotions.

Well done, I enjoyed it even if it evoked sadness.




Thank you so much Chirp! Much of what I post is filled with definitive emotions. Sadness is a feeling and emotion. Thank you for reading and understanding......I appreciate your support.

Peace and Love


KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 01:20 AM
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I felt your words-known to many but not expressed by others so eloquently-unrequieted love-that's pain.



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 01:25 AM
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originally posted by: Justso
I felt your words-known to many but not expressed by others so eloquently-unrequieted love-that's pain.


Oh my Justso thank you for the time to read my poem, and then say such kind comments. I wanted to reach, but not to far, where a lot of us have been. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

Peace



KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 04:50 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Awesome!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 04:52 AM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours

Awesome!


as always, thank you Qman....Hope you had a wonderful day at the beach. Any blow up dolls....LOL



KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 05:06 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Lol just a real one. Now I have to sleep as I remade the bed! Have a great day!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 05:16 AM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours



Lol just a real one. Now I have to sleep as I remade the bed! Have a great day!


lol......I am gone....time for coffee, news and off to the office or shed or wherever I can be productive. You've been a very kind brother. Have a beautiful day. Later maybe



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 05:44 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours
Sir KD thank you so much for sharing that was amazing. The emotions that you put into it just flowed right off the page!!! Beautiful!!!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 10:23 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Nice one TNIO!! I could feel Your Pain. Very Nicely written!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 11:52 AM
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originally posted by: Martin75
a reply to: thenightisours
Sir KD thank you so much for sharing that was amazing. The emotions that you put into it just flowed right off the page!!! Beautiful!!!



Ah, thank you so muchMartin for taking the time to read the poem and your kind words regarding it. It makes me happy. Thank You

Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 11:55 AM
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originally posted by: SyxPak
a reply to: thenightisours

Nice one TNIO!! I could feel Your Pain. Very Nicely written!


Thank you so much SyxPak! I appreciate that you took time to read the poem and I am happy that you liked it.


Peace and Love

KD



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 09:15 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

You are quite Welcome!



posted on Aug, 1 2016 @ 09:24 PM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Ah, the love pain, I can take that, nice poem, I already read one that is related to pain but the physical one no the love related one.




posted on Aug, 2 2016 @ 02:28 AM
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originally posted by: marg6043
a reply to: thenightisours

Ah, the love pain, I can take that, nice poem, I already read one that is related to pain but the physical one no the love related one.



Thanks marg6043 for stopping by to read the poem. I'm glad you enjoyed the 'love pain' implication. Thank you.

Peace

KD



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