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A Love Like Ours

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posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 05:36 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Hey Aware, you can just call me KD, short and easy. Please, I have seen your writings on many threads that I responded to you. You have a very keen awareness (sorry no pun intended, LOL) about the world.

I am just so happy to be part of your friends and close allies. My poems, yes, speak of love and romance and intimacy. I can express myself that way, because that is how I imagine it.

Please post more and of course I'd love to hear from you and Kkeep you close to my cadre of friends here on ATS.

Peace and Love

KD

p.s. I thought maybe I went a little too far with my feelings, at best maybe 'R' rated, but were meant to express a simple thing called LOVE




posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 05:53 AM
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I like it except for the last line.

"I can't believe you are mine".

The connotation is ownership.

Maybe "I believe we belong together" would be simpler, better?



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 06:06 AM
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originally posted by: Maverick7
I like it except for the last line.

"I can't believe you are mine".

The connotation is ownership.

Maybe "I believe we belong together" would be simpler, better?


Yes, I see what you are saying. By no means was I talking about ownership, it was a feeling that we belonged to each other. So part of the prose may have gotten in the way. But I understand. Thank you for your feedback and for reading the poem. Otherwise I hoped you enjoyed it.




posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 06:07 AM
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a reply to: Maverick7

It's just a story.



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 06:12 AM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: Maverick7

It's just a story.


Thanks Qman...you are the best. I saw your other post in the Shed.....you are wild man.....lmao.



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 06:19 AM
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a reply to: thenightisours

Lol I was just being a good host to my friends lol. We went to the party of love. Lol ok I have to sleep its 4:20am



posted on Jul, 31 2016 @ 06:22 AM
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originally posted by: Quantum12
a reply to: thenightisours

Lol I was just being a good host to my friends lol. We went to the party of love. Lol ok I have to sleep its 4:20am


You are an amazing friend to all of your friends......Peace Brother Q



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