Two Contrasting Poems

Greetings, all.

I felt the urge to write a couple poems tonight, which I present here to you now. The first is entitled, "Undefeated", and the second, "Dirge"

They are unedited, but I hope that you enjoy them. Each poem represents opposing viewpoints, with the purpose of that being to reach the truth. Ultimately, of course, their meaning is going to be entirely up to you, the reader.

So, without further ado~


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Nice. I used to write poems like this back in high school!

Very good

a reply to: awareness10

Thanks hahaha you hit the nail on the head! well done.
oddly enough, they were inspired by some old ones from high school that I just found again. They were a bit too morbid and strange, so I decided to scrap them in favor of the two up there. I'm getting ready to move in the coming weeks, so I'm in the process of going through old papers and whatnot.

Anywhooo

a reply to: rukia

Awesome, well good luck with your move, you should post a few more. You've got me wondering about whether or not to post a few of my old ones as well!

a reply to: rukia

Awsome, write more!

a reply to: awareness10

Yes you better post your old ones!

a reply to: Quantum12

I'll think about it, thanks