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Journey On the Sea

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posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:21 PM
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Blue bellowed by through the ballroom beneath the sky,
Swallowed starlight shallow in the evening,
As soft touch bled to the heart,
A hearth lit on fire.

Limbs 'bout the form,
Memory key,
And love forever more.

Farewell to my warm desire,
Farewell to the warmth of the home,
Welcome the cold of the night,
The shady city lights.

The heart declared course,
To the heart of the Blue,
To the core of the Sea,
The end of the World should no port be open to me.

Sails and wind,
Bow of the Ship,
Ripping through the Sea.

To declare,
What the heart had swore,
Eternity,
Nothing more.




posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:39 PM
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Hope in'm not overstepping, here...this reminds me of my best friend from school...melancholy stuff, if I could I would show her this, nice work! My friend is the most beautiful, person ever!
Thank you for this.
I'm inspired to strive at a poem... if can find some old work.
Peace



posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:44 PM
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a reply to: peppycat

No overstepping done. I'm not sure I meant for it to be melancholy. Rather not, but instead the general topic is a girl and soon to declare the love for her. Please do share your work, I'd love to read it as I'm sure others would. Glad you liked it.



posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:50 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc thanks my work is from another time another place... and won't make any sense at all.
Will look for it perhaps, through a giant messy frame of thinking.
I say melancholy, because that is how I felt reading it.
Thanks, in'll strive to win my friends affection back and send her a note... that makes any sense, she might rather prefer a story and not poem, her name is fluer.



posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:55 PM
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a reply to: peppycat
True, everything is up for interpretation.

Hope you manage to win affection. Interesting name, sounds French. Stories are fine too. On what topic do you think?

I promised once to share a love story here(mentioned it to you). I still have to get around to the end.
edit on 11-7-2016 by ksiezyc because: (no reason given)



posted on Jul, 11 2016 @ 11:59 PM
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Wonderful!



posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 12:01 AM
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a reply to: ksiezyc all I know to write about is fae and cats... maybe Sci-Fi ...and ghosts or spirits... oh and dragons.
I think in'm done with writing though.
I watch TV and then work and then prepare food, clean houses ect...i could right about street fights, that's always a good topic, for me. My friend likes to brawl a bunch... just yelling and stuff, he needs to fight ...loss of girlfriend issues...I never know just what the future holds!
Maybe I find some inspirations from street life.




posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 12:01 AM
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a reply to: Night Star
Thanks. Finally to be done this Wednesday.



posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 12:04 AM
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a reply to: peppycat
Life will always get better. It sucks to lose someone you love, or to love someone that doesn't hold the same feelings to you. Maybe not what you mean, but hell that has been tormenting me, but life gets better. The strong persist. Hug from me to you and your friend. If you enjoy writing, don't give up ever.



posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 12:56 AM
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a reply to: ksiezyc thanks, appreciate the pep talk about loving writing, been told jam too stupid..in so many subtle ways, is all.even had plans on an epic novel.
Take care, thanks for being so kind.😊




posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 09:03 AM
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a reply to: peppycat
I think you should do it. Try at the very least. No one should be able to put you own. As many people that I've met on these boards you are a beautiful soul. Take care now, be strong.



posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 10:43 AM
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a reply to: ksiezyc thanks, I thoroughly agree many beautiful souls, here... very kind folks, people.
Maybe I buy best pen and notebook and study, now?
Then send to an editor.

😔



posted on Jul, 12 2016 @ 11:17 AM
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a reply to: peppycat
Grab a pen and paper and write whenever you want to on whatever topic you wish. Do you plan on writing a novel? I'm not sure what the process is, but editing is vital.



posted on Jul, 13 2016 @ 10:07 AM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

Nice writing. I missed this one!👍🏽



posted on Jul, 13 2016 @ 10:08 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed




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