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Undelivered

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posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 06:17 PM
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Undelivered

The trumpets sound in concession,
Each man delivers his own confession.
On their knees, they profess to me,
Thinking this will set them free.

As tears fall from their begging eyes,
They speak the truth, mixed with lies,
And expect to be given absolution,
As though they've made their restitution,

But I'm not the one who can give them this,
I can't fill the void, the emptiness.
I can't deliver them, or save their soul,
Take their pain, or make them whole.

Forgiveness..
Can be only granted by them,
To find it they must look within.


Wrote this one some time ago..I don't remember if I posted it or not...thought I would now...

Thanks,
blend57

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edit on 9-7-2016 by blend57 because: meh..schanged things

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posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 06:41 PM
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a reply to: blend57

Truth, so few people take time to hammer out their own dents, and instead try to bang their dents into others hoping that in doing so their dents become smoothed out in the process. Entering smooth each time between those invisible walls can make some wary of who may be trying to park it next to them.



posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 07:48 PM
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a reply to: blend57
Yes that was very deep to me! Thank you Blend. S/F



posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 08:19 PM
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I don't remember if I posted it or not...thought I would now...

Either you posted this before, (another subforum?),
or I just experienced some wicked deja vu.

As true the second time or the first,
whatever the case may be.
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posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 08:37 PM
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I just looked through all my poems..unless it is buried within one of the groups of poems.. I only post here..so, maybe it is buried in one of those..I have a ton i don't post..cuz, well..I don't know if they are against T&C... I have a wordpress site.. but all of them are password protected on it...so, I'm sure you saw it here..

I'm glad you find some truth in it and thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

a reply to: Quantum12
Quantum12.. you are always so positive when you comment on peoples writing. Thank you!

a reply to: BigBrotherDarkness

I really like the analogies you weave within your thoughts. They make me smile as I read through your words. Thank you for contributing those words to my thread.

Thanks and I apologize for the repeat..truly sorry
blend57



posted on Jul, 9 2016 @ 08:46 PM
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All people are unique like you. Your writing is part of your soul. Your a unique person to me. I have leaned a lot from you. I want to thank you for being you. You have talent!




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