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A World Unconcealed

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posted on Sep, 9 2016 @ 04:32 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak
a reply to: awareness10

Thanks you two!


I might have to write a sequel to this one, and see how the girl's endeavour has come along. My job for today.




posted on Sep, 11 2016 @ 09:04 PM
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originally posted by: kaelci
a reply to: MiddleInitial

I read it and found your style to have an easy flow and the plot, being a matter of preference. falling in mine, was very well out lined.


I'm undertaking the grand quest in hoping to one day be a published writer, and I'm happy to read all critique and criticism.

I wish you the best of luck, but please remember to write for YOU, for the characters in your heart that long for a voice.
And about critique. I admire and applaud your approach. With out critique we are sailboats with out water.


....so just wrote this to keep my brain moving.

For some reason I don't believe you, I am guessing you are all ways on over drive.



 
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