A Whispering Wind

A whispering wind tore at my flesh,
A torrent of rain swept all my life away,
My tears lost with the drops of heavenly dew,
My love lost to the valley's of grey.

Once the Sun shined down upon me,
The sky was without cloud,
My heart and my cloth without stain,
Yet now my heart blackened with the loss of my love,
My cloth stained with the tears that I cried.

I took then to Sea,
That time that I lost her,
Sailed a ship or was it a bottle?

Beneath the Moon I ran,
I sought out the Stars,
She was one among them,
So bright and so far.

My ship sunk to the depths of the Sea,
But carried was I out to the beach,
Of a land unforeign to me,
To the sight of a new land,
Covered with new stars,
A new beauty presented to me.

Yet still a wind tears at me,
And torrents of rain forever disgrace me.

Still my heart dark,
My joy incomplete,
Without love there is nothing,
But a blissful sleep.

a reply to: ksiezyc

👍🏽 awesome

a reply to: Quantum12
Thanks.

a reply to: ksiezyc



I dig your style. Excellent work.

a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat
Lol it sounded fine while writing. I posted and reread it and it does not sound that great to me. I was watching Despicable Me on television(Um, no comment) and it caused a sad emotion because it was a sad part and a connection. Thanks though!!! Where will I share my writing if not ATS?! With whom!!

Beautiful!!!!!!!

a reply to: ksiezyc

Well that was a cheery little number!
Some nice lines in there ksiezyc.

S+F.

Watch out. Led Zeppelin might sue.

can you hear the wind blow, and did you know,
your stairway lies on the whispering wind.

a reply to: Night Star
Thanks!

a reply to: midicon
Glad you enjoyed. Not sure about cheery though.

a reply to: Phage
Ah yes, as revenge for that band suing them for something supposedly similar. Haha

a reply to: ksiezyc
Thank you for sharing!!! I love your writing

a reply to: Martin75
Thanks Always love sharing whatever I write. That is the point of writing.