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The Brief Love

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posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:08 PM
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The silent beckon to me,
By her soul,
The might of her eye.

I drifted far to sea,
The light color of blue,
Was all that I could see,
In the sky
And in the sea,
Oh this beauty,
I adoreth thee.

Up in Heaven,
Were her eyes,
One the Sun,
One the Moon.

Her heavenly breath,
The whispering wind,
Her soft voice,
The song of a wild bird.

Her time not mine,
Her love not there,
And she walks away,
But for brief moments I gazed in her eye,
For brief moments I saw the Gates of Heaven,
Heard the angel's trumpets,
And would feel in the night,
Through brief embrace,
Her gentleness.




posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:15 PM
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Well, surely we've all felt this for our mothers..

At some point in time.




posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:17 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs
Um, our mothers? I'm thinking of my friend's sister here and a very small infatuation that makes no darn sense.
edit on 14-6-2016 by ksiezyc because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:17 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

Nice one s/f



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:18 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Thank you



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:18 PM
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posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:19 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

What ever comes from your heart is amazing!



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:19 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs
As long as you liked it. Oh and the blue is her dress that she wore that afternoon/evening/night. Yeah it was a long day spent there.



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:20 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Thank you very much. I love writing about um, her despite just a tiny, intsy bitsy infatuation.



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:22 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

Any story or peom from another person is amazing!



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:23 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
That is true. Sharing our lives and emotions.



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:25 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

Sorry, just giving you a hard time. Pretty decent poem though




posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:26 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs
I should try writing a real good one, but if I do I have to wonder what I plan on doing with it. Nothing probably. It is ever so small. The infatuation.



posted on Jun, 14 2016 @ 11:28 PM
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a reply to: ksiezyc

Lol.
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