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Her Eyes

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posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:10 PM
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Her eyes said to me,
Made command that I should bleed.

Not loose my blood,
But my love,
For her,
The ever sweet.

Her lips spoke to me,
A song of beauty
And claimed there was no way.

Into her heart
I could not steal,
Nor her mind
Could I invade.
Her soul not mine,
Yet mine hers,
Uncertain.

Angels wept,
Maidens shamed,
When compared
With her beauty.

Everlasting in the Sun,
All the shine,
On her gown.

The moonlight painted her,
So alluring
Of mystery.

Her eyes did command,
Her lips said not.
In her eyes did I drown,
In her voice I soared up high.
Her soul, Her mind,
Lord make these mine,
And her skin for my gentle caress.




posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:42 PM
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Your poem is very good, in fact its awesome!

It reminded me of a song by Peter Gabriel
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Great job Bro!
edit on 13-6-2016 by visitedbythem because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:44 PM
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Beautiful



posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:45 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem
Hah, thank you for the kind compliment. The link failed to work for me. What is the title of the song? Again thank you. I'll try to think something up every night.



posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:45 PM
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a reply to: SomeDumbBroad
Thank you miss



posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:52 PM
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originally posted by: ksiezyc
a reply to: visitedbythem
Hah, thank you for the kind compliment. The link failed to work for me. What is the title of the song? Again thank you. I'll try to think something up every night.
I think I fixed it, It should be working now

Peter Gabriel - In Your Eyes



posted on Jun, 13 2016 @ 10:55 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem
Yep it works now. I have horrible internet though.



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