posted on Jun, 12 2016 @ 12:46 AM
Hello Miss Elfie, and the Majestic Kitty Wizard!
And whoever else may be lurking in the shadows or behind that bush over there! *stares suspiciously* LOL.
Glad to hear that you had a wonderful night, Miss Night!
It sounds like you had a fantastic evening.
I've not been doing much, and am taking a break from words before I pull my hair out. Just staring at everything I've written so far, and getting
caught up in the whole past-and-present-tense debate within myself.
The way I write... it makes sense to ME.
"The chamber was well lit by the dozens of golden candles that were placed in every corner, glowing brightly despite the mournful nature
of the room."
"In the centre of the room lay an aged man on an altar of quartz delicately adorned with silver trim, he lay unclothed and deceased, the
light from the candles causing black shadows to fall upon his face."
"The deep and melodious tune amplified in the enclosed space, expanding ever outwards, encircling all those who had the privilege of
attending this most inauspicious rite."
I don't know. It makes sense to ME. But I struggle to comprehend if it's "wrong" or not, because in a way I'm mixing past and present.
*stops rambling about boring things and goes to make a nice warm caffeinated beverage*
Mmmm, afternoon coffee.
edit on 12 6 2016 by kaelci because: (no reason given)