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The Soul Sitter...

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Quantum12

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 10:17 PM
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He clicks his feet and butters his role,
Now he is coming after your soul.

In the night he thinks and dreams,
Hoping your about to scream.

Now it's dark he's in the park,
The park you say is in his way.

Time to move he gets his groove,
You run away acting smooth.

It's his turn he is about to burn,
Your in his way you lost your turn.

Acting like dark ice,
You think he's nice,

Now he's mean and turning green,
You run for the helm and split your seam.

There he goes staring at your nose,
You better run and do not pose.

He enters your night he is about to bite,
There you go, have a safe flight.

The soul sitter strikes again.


reldra

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:08 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

That is creepy and sets a mood. But poems don't rhyme so much. I have seen this here over and over. Poetry has more of a rythm and less rhyming.


Tiamat384

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:11 PM
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a reply to: reldra
Ah reldra what are you talking about. It is beautiful! Everyone has their own style after all.


Quantum12

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:16 PM
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Thank you for reading it! The story is about a bad person who raped people and lost his life due to being caught!

Thank you Relda for the kind words!


Quantum12

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:17 PM
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a reply to: Tiamat384
Thank you friend, where is your love story? I want to read it


Tiamat384

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:21 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Give me a week about. It's long you know. Well. Relatively anyways. I really like writing it though. I'll share a link in the Shed for people to read it


Always like reading what you write, so it's a good thing you write so often!


Quantum12

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:36 PM
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a reply to: Tiamat384

Can't wait to read it, make sure it does not rhyme or Relda will have a fit lol


Tiamat384

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:38 PM
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Haha you write beautifully no worries. Perhaps she has a point, but I still believe in varying styles. Well, you've seen much of it, if you read it. Mostly in Shed 4, some in Shed 5.


Quantum12

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:45 PM
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a reply to: Tiamat384

I think Relda is a guy I could be wrong! Relda we love you!


Tiamat384

posted on May, 23 2016 @ 11:51 PM
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Wait really? Whoops. Sorry!




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