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Living in a cob web...

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posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:37 PM
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My hand was bruised,
Living in a room full of emptiness.

I sat there in regret for all the good things I have done,
Reading from a book about losing a life.

Seeing the life of drivers pass us by,
Hunting the seas just to stay alive.

The sky was blue and bruised,
And there you were leading me on.

I am in your house,
Waiting patiently.

For your return,
A night to burn.

Blood boils in the sea,
Telling times of talking to me.




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:42 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Aww. Sweet and sad.

What's wrong Q?

Was dinner not good?



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:43 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Dinner was ok, I never had dessert!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:44 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

ROFL!

Got it!

Good lack of fruit tart dessert poem then!




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:46 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

You know me like a past lover in the sunlight!
edit on 5 18 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 10:51 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Umm. You better fix that post.

Just sayin'...


edit on 18-5-2016 by TNMockingbird because: okay. weird. but better! LOL Thanks!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 11:07 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

LMAO!!!

I had settled for the sister analogy!



You're a trip!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:18 AM
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posted on May, 19 2016 @ 02:57 AM
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Quantum

Brilliant.

👌



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 07:00 AM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat
Thank you friend!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 07:02 AM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

I am happy you stopped in. Thank you! How is North Cali?



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:37 PM
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Wow, really liked this one Q!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:38 PM
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a reply to: Night Star

Thank you kindly Night Star!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:42 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Nice! Did you write while slowly strumming a guitar? I think an A minor will be in there somewhere!

Any updates on the Ecuador earthquake? Hahaha! I thought, "Hey, that is one weird story I'll check out later"!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:45 PM
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a reply to: TEOTWAWKIAIFF

LOL, thank you! No updates but your turn to write one!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 12:58 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Check it out! This is a wild and twisty tale from TEOT but not quite fiction. And it has a soundtrack!

ATS: My post to Baddogma's metacafé



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 01:05 PM
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a reply to: TEOTWAWKIAIFF
Wow your a good writer and a little twisted. Twisted is a good thing!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 01:14 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Thanks! TEOT with a twist! (hehe)

I just found it strange how several different things are going on in that post. The lyrics to the song, Shakespeare, the quantum mechanics terms I am reading in a book, and those strange synchronicities that seem to pop up and present themselves (hehehe, "thems" "elves" which is perfect for the "alien running from the cops" thread!) whenever I read about quantum (hey, quantum12!) universe! The Scotsmen-Scotland thing is pretty funny too!

Did you see the _9Mother9Horse9Eyes9 thread? There is some strange and freaky writing there!

[ETA: ATS link here]


edit on 19-5-2016 by TEOTWAWKIAIFF because: missing word

edit on 19-5-2016 by TEOTWAWKIAIFF because: add url



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 01:17 PM
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a reply to: TEOTWAWKIAIFF

No I have not seen that thread. I will try to find it now!



posted on May, 19 2016 @ 01:37 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

They are stacking up! Einstein's relativity being 100 year old/quantum-quantum12 (physics), lyrics in my post/in your story, web-entanglement, and your "I am the highway" story/Audioslave and "Like a Stone"

On a cob web, afternoon, in a room full of emptiness
By a freeway, I confess, I was lost in the pages
Of a book, full of death, reading I will die alone
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In your house, I long to be
Room by room, patiently
I'll wait for you there, like a stone
I'll wait for you there, alone




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