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Another Blackmoon Dream

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posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:18 PM
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Another Psychosomatic blackmoon dream
On the verge of a pathogenesis beyond recourse
Look into my blood filled sockets
See the sanguine blood weep sorely down my fevered cheek
A blood red necklace of virulent thorns
Another blackmoon dream where all I feel is red
This blister burst upon my soul
A rage so pure I feel alive again
Solid darkness becomes my world
I join the ranks of mindless killers searching for a wet flesh meal
Just another blackmoon dream




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:20 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Awesome, I was waiting for another great one from you!

Thank you!!!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:22 PM
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Quantum

Thanks man. The flood of poems inspired me so I wrote.




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:24 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Ok, great line!
"This blister burst upon my soul"



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:29 PM
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Quantum

You like that one huh? It was one of my favorites too.






posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:40 PM
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That was great!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:59 PM
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a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Geez, that was rather intense. In a good way!

I love this line, "Another blackmoon dream where all I feel is red".

Great stuff! Can't wait to see what you add to the Shed story.
jacy



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:02 PM
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Night

Thank you! I'm glad you think so.






posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:05 PM
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jacy

Thanks. I originally wrote that line as "see red" but I though it felt more, I dunno, gritty (?) to switch the sense.

Also, Imma cookin' somethin' up!
edit on Cpm3Wednesday0620164031Wed, 18 May 2016 15:06:40 -05002016 by CagliostroTheGreat because: edit to add



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:10 PM
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originally posted by: CagliostroTheGreat
jacy

Thanks. I originally wrote that line as "see red" but I though it felt more, I dunno, gritty (?) to switch the sense.

Also, Imma cookin' somethin' up!


Oh, glad you changed it...I don't know why but I really like it! "...all I feel is red"...gritty indeed!

I should try my hand at writing serious prose, but my style is more Dr. Seuss, lol.
I think I'm just jealous haha...talking to myself saying, "Why can't you come up with something like that?"
*shrugs & pouts*
jacy



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:12 PM
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jacy

I think you have to have deeply rooted psychological issues first.




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:20 PM
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originally posted by: CagliostroTheGreat
jacy

I think you have to have deeply rooted psychological issues first.



Oh trust me, I has issues.

jacy



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