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The Rabbit's Potion

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posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:40 PM
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That's such a peculiar position
To find my sun in
I half
Expected it
To be gone
By the time I woke
Such a curious position
To find my moon in
That silly rabbit
Is so low and so cold
And he
Wants to give me a potion
He wants to show me how
Our Everything is broken

They came together
And had words
And remembered the bastard
Is coming back
They seen it before
The rabbit laments
When he stole his spark
And left Aries with his scar

And little brother keeps acting up
Because he knows what's to come
Screaming out because he knows it's his turn.
He doesn't care if we can't read
His signs. The old rabbit knows better too.
He can't even help himself
What is for us to do?!
Obviously, Nothing...
That leaves us
Totally effing screwed!

Shut up and wait
haven't you heard?
Ignorance is bliss.
In an instance such as this,
Only a deaf blind fool
Could not notice everything's amiss.
What madness to envy
An affliction such as this

Just a stab at expressing myself in a new forum. Thanks for taking the time to listen!

Take it easy & if it's easy... Take it home


LuCky StiFF
edit on 18-5-2016 by wastedown because: Grammar nazi evasion

edit on 18-5-2016 by wastedown because: Grammar nazi evasion

edit on 18-5-2016 by wastedown because: Auto correct sux




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:45 PM
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a reply to: wastedown

That was really good!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:51 PM
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Awww... Thanks
I write music but this just kind of came out on its own. So strange when that happens. Like is a download or something, when a thought comes through pretty much complete... Thanks again for your kind words... Im not shy ever but felt odd posting it...a reply to: Quantum12



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:00 PM
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Very interesting!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:03 PM
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a reply to: wastedown

That is the best kind of writing, it comes from who knows where.



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