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The Cavity

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posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:30 PM
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falling down the cavity of undoing
the unseen hosts swarm
feasting on confusion
an endless fall
into an unreachable bosom of unending night
a constant picking at the flesh of ones soul
one feels nothing but remorse regret and redress
at ones inability to correct.. [connect?]
it is just a falling
unto the centre of the cosmos.
the ultimate black hole
I am only sweat and blood
I see only fire and death
I cause only pain.
i am the ochre dripping at midnight




posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:31 PM
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a reply to: chris_stibrany

Really deep!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:37 PM
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Thanks

I thought about posting short stories but I am trying to get them published so I will just post poems here from time to time instead.



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 01:49 PM
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chris_stibrany

Quality stuff!

Welcome back and welcome to the ATS writers bloc!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:04 PM
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Good job!



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:50 PM
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Thanks! How will I know when there is a new writing contest?

a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 02:51 PM
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a reply to: chris_stibrany

There is one now.
www.abovetopsecret.com...
edit on 5 18 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 18 2016 @ 03:03 PM
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Cool thanks! I will see if anything comes to mind.
a reply to: Quantum12



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