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Around a Camp Fire [AFC2016]

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posted on May, 16 2016 @ 12:31 PM
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Michael and Jennifer, time travelers from 3024 were camping in the center of their planet Bethon located near zone 64 by planet Zeith . They were at their campfire telling stories, waiting for other friends to arrive when they had a crazy phone call...

[ACF2016]
Campfire Story
Writer
Born 3024
Died 1944
Edit: Note: This is the story being told, this is a made up story!

The sun was setting at 11:33 P.M. today, we live on planet Bethon, time moves backward, just last week the sunset was at 11:47 P.M.

Around about 11:17 P.M., our long day started getting dark, most of us were worried about Truda and Eros. Seconds passed as we saw strange lights at the front of our narrow tent.

The spooky part was we were in the middle of planet Bethon, we hiked the trail to the center of our planet. We are really in the middle of nowhere, so it had to be Truda and Eros with the strange light. We all heard loud noises like slamming car doors, this could not be the case, we are in the middle of the planet.

We then heard Truda and Eros plain as day. I shouted . "We're over here by the drop to the other side of the planet." Something slammed again, we heard loud footsteps near us... and at the point that someone should have seen us...it was silent. All we could hear were the sounds of our campfire.

My scared eyes gazed at Jennifer. She was staring at me. It was quiet. I yelled, "Hey, Truda. Hey, Eros." Jennifer slapped my face and said "Be quiet Michael, we do not know what is out here". I bit my lip and said "Ok, I will never shout again with a slap like that".

Jennifer and I slowly stood up and walked to the only trail leading to the surface of Bethon, and... nothing. Everything was nothing, no people, no sound. Jennifer and I were freaked out.

All of a sudden my iPhone 63 rang. It was Truda's sister calling to inform us that at 11:17P.M that evening, a fatal fall involving Truda and Eros took place 17 clicks from the the path to the center of Bethon.

It's almost as if they just wanted to keep Michael and Jennifer's tradition, no one has ever made it to their campfire stories.

That night the year 1944 the ghost of Michael and Jennifer went to find their friends.
 

edit on 5 16 2016 by Quantum12 because: (no reason given)

edit on 5 16 2016 by Quantum12 because: Spelling




posted on May, 16 2016 @ 01:36 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Quant your writing is always so amazing!!! So are they all dead?? OMG, I wasn't expecting that!!



posted on May, 16 2016 @ 01:39 PM
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a reply to: Martin75

Yes they all died, even the campfire died. Thank you kindly for reading the Campfire story. Your turn!!!

I know your story will be great!
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posted on May, 16 2016 @ 07:00 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

This is Cool Q! I liked it very much!

(See note in Writing Contest Thread about this!)

Syx...



posted on May, 16 2016 @ 07:02 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thank you kindly. I am happy you read my story.



posted on May, 16 2016 @ 07:34 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

You are Very Welcome My Friend!



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 01:39 AM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Good job Q


Iphone #63, huh?

Perhaps I can get THAT one to work properly!

Loved it!




posted on May, 17 2016 @ 06:43 AM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you chirp, iPhone 63 has no flaws. No updates needed!



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 07:24 AM
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cool ! interesting time concept



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 08:53 AM
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a reply to: cosmickat

Thank you, cosmickat. I am waiting your your story!



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 09:17 AM
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Great story! The living-backwards-through-time angle (like Merlin!) is twisty - very cool.

- AB



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 10:00 AM
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a reply to: AboveBoard

Thank you AB, your story is amazing!



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 04:45 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Hey, that was really good! Very different twist, I liked it.

Once again, everyone has written a unique story.
I'm enjoying reading them all so far.

jacy



posted on May, 17 2016 @ 04:51 PM
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a reply to: jacygirl

Thank you kind friend. I love reading how every person is unique and all the writing is different.



posted on May, 22 2016 @ 04:05 AM
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Great story , so they actually were at the center of their planet , like the journey to the center of the Earth right?

Inspirational writing, you gave me some ideas..



posted on May, 22 2016 @ 04:17 AM
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a reply to: 0bserver1

Thank you, a Jules Verne plot lol



posted on May, 30 2016 @ 08:58 AM
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That was fun, and suitably creepy! Nice work!



posted on May, 30 2016 @ 08:59 AM
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a reply to: 0zzymand0s

Thank you and I enjoyed your writing from yesterday
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